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The Measurement (Free verse) by thepinkbunnyofdoom
He looked down at the table and counted his shots
She'd broke so now the cue was his and one thing,
One thing was yet to be determinded,
How long did he want to play this game?
He decided to make an impressive start
First a simple cut here and some skilled language
Then a declicate feat, which he casually ignored
Seeing the challenge of her eyes
He gave her control, but under his terms
He held his lead, but used her every move
To his advantage
He had already seen every angle, every line
He toyed with her, cruel but commanding
Few knew that this had once been, his proving grounds
Where he met with rockstars and wishful thinkers
To prove that he was still more than fiction
She struggled, but couldn't break free of his design
The traps had been layed with care and precision
She knew he had her, but couldn't help but try
But at the end of the day, She fell short of his measure
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Arithmetic Mean: 8.6
Weighted score: 6.8
Overall Rank: 399
Posted: March 16, 2005 2:23 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2005 2:23 AM PST
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