| Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
9-Mar-05/4:16 PM |
of a tractor's or
of tractors'
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
9-Mar-05/11:19 AM |
to truly refuse to accept my last comment would be to not reply to it. you replied. this act implies acceptance. You, in light of this overwhelming evidence, DO accept my comment.
you are swelling nicely in your stew, which simmers fancifully around your browne sides. you are almost ready. I am beginning to salivate at the prosepect of having a nibble.
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| Re: a comment on wishes by the_poetess |
9-Mar-05/10:50 AM |
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YOu are a dumpling that lives in the fetid stew of your own incompetence.
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| Re: eat what you want. by burgerking33 |
9-Mar-05/7:29 AM |
NO! Don't eat that burger, Don't eat that ice cream!
Give it to me!
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| Re: a comment on eat what you want. by burgerking33 |
9-Mar-05/7:28 AM |
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do you think that the poems written by CLS are good?
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| Re: Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
9-Mar-05/7:22 AM |
one pause to mimic....
I like it. the first stanza is unnecessarily difficult, especially while we try to decode "portently"
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| Re: a comment on Poet, Earth mover by INTRANSIT |
9-Mar-05/7:20 AM |
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no. portentous is the adj form. portentously would be the adv form.
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| Re: a comment on a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle |
9-Mar-05/7:12 AM |
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wait a minute. I had no idea you were trying to pass this off as a poeme. -10-
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| Re: a comment on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
9-Mar-05/6:46 AM |
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my email address is on my home page
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| Re: Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
8-Mar-05/5:32 PM |
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I would like to request a link to one of your P.I. Readings, as recommended to me by jeremi, horus8, and the 3 or 4 other names he has on this site. I hear they are the highest imaginable art, and would love to sample.
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| Re: a comment on Fastso by Dovina |
8-Mar-05/10:02 AM |
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| Re: Fat girls Who Wear Short Skirts During Winter Quarter by DurtKL |
8-Mar-05/9:59 AM |
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yah. this gives me a chubby.
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| Re: The Reply by LintyWeenis |
7-Mar-05/10:56 AM |
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Can't say I loved the poem, but I cannot give less than a 10 to "LintyWeenis"
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| Re: You Fell Asleep First by jessicazee |
7-Mar-05/10:53 AM |
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Liked it better before. The language seemed clearer. The stuff you have added is interesting, but poorly worded, imho.
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| Re: Beetwen by Dovina |
7-Mar-05/10:50 AM |
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metamorphose? Of course, this is bunk, but you know that. Points for different, but then you could use that fucked up font...what the fuck is it called?............Wingdings, and make it completely illegible.
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| Re: Fastso by Dovina |
5-Mar-05/8:44 AM |
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ahhh.. those were the good old days when I could lie back on the sofa of an afternoon and slag away, unimpeded by the demanding task of critiquing poemes.
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| Re: Fastso by Dovina |
5-Mar-05/8:42 AM |
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Well, it may have gone on a bit, but the first stanza made me guffaw with a recklessness I had not known since middle school. I think I will give you a real vote on this one, as it is a nice change-up from that programming hunger bullshit. You have earned it with what I percieve to be genuine repentance. Forgiveness is yours my child.
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| Re: a note to the politically inactive fundamentalist christians by i_am_the_popsicle |
5-Mar-05/8:36 AM |
Well, if nothing else, at least this puddle of poorly executed drivel has sparked another masterpiece from
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
For providing the impetus for his his comment, I applaud you, and, really, I should vote 10 on this asinine ramble based on his comment alone. But I cannot, in good conscience, do so.
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| Re: We Have Nothing to Talk About by jessicazee |
4-Mar-05/4:18 PM |
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| Re: Pain by DaRkMoOnLuVeR |
4-Mar-05/4:16 PM |
at least by the bay.
that's just bloody good writing.
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