Re: Sunrise by Katrina	17-May-04/1:37 PM
Well, for starters, I would work on your spelling (although I think many of the ones here are simply typos).
Re: 'Till Then by sliver	17-May-04/1:32 PM
That's quite a sad little song...played mostly in minor chords I'd bet..
Re: and the world evolves by peaceseeker	17-May-04/1:26 PM
I'd give the poem an 8, but since I just read that you're a social worker I'm going to give you a 10. This is because, as a social worker, I know how bad it is.
Re: Slayer Sucks by peaceseeker	17-May-04/1:24 PM
A 10 simply for the title (and the poem's not bad either. Slayer does suck.
Re: Gravity Rides by Jealousy	15-May-04/10:12 AM
Here's the man with teeth like God's shoeshine, He sparkles, shimmers, shines. This needs to have quotes around it.
Re: a comment on FINGER PIE by titan69	13-May-04/3:00 PM
Don't know pie tom....
Re: a comment on Bleeding in the American South by wilco	13-May-04/2:50 PM
It's not going to make me feel badly about it either way. I was just trying to get the constructive criticism out of the fact that you wanted to cut your throat, so thanks.
Re: a comment on Waste Replacing by Phalkon	13-May-04/2:35 PM
seriously.
Re: a comment on FINGER PIE by titan69	13-May-04/2:35 PM
the fucking "American Pie" guy.
Re: a comment on Bleeding in the American South by wilco	13-May-04/2:32 PM
So it is...but does it suck? Depressing and shitty are two different things. I'm just curious if the one is because it is horribly depressing or horribly bad (or both). Anyway, thanks for playing. :0)
Re: a comment on Bleeding in the American South by wilco	13-May-04/2:15 PM
Why the fuck would you do that?
Re: FINGER PIE by titan69	13-May-04/2:13 PM
Jason Biggs?
Re: Prophets by unknown^user	13-May-04/2:11 PM
What's the world coming to when even God can't look at internet porn?
Re: a comment on Waste Replacing by Phalkon	13-May-04/2:09 PM
wtf...
Re: She Dreams of Yesterday by Phalkon	13-May-04/2:07 PM
Not too bad, but you may want to consider changing this to a lyric and adding a chorus or something. Just a thought...
Re: an ode to hypatia by francis nor capule	13-May-04/2:02 PM
Good thoughts.
Re: a comment on The Blood-Stained Body by Phalkon	13-May-04/2:00 PM
The "liberal defenders of homosexual marriage and "gay" rights" would simply claim that there is a vast conspiracy perpetrated by the conservatives to make homosexuals out to be criminals in order to convince the public that they should all be burned at the stake.
Re: a comment on Bleeding in the American South by wilco	13-May-04/5:42 AM
Correct.
Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/6:15 PM
Oh..I wasn't aware..gracias, then.
Re: a comment on Dial Tone by cuddlytiger17	12-May-04/6:00 PM
You're very welcome and if you read any of mine (and, of course, I would encourage you to do so), please don't take them as examples of genuinely good poetry.