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FINGER PIE (Free verse) by titan69 When we are in bed at night.
And I put my arm around you.
When my finger tips touch your soft skin.
When I get up close and slowly move in.
To me it always seems like the first time,
that first kiss.
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As you will see.
A women under the covers in the dark.
never ages.??
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Posted: May 12, 2004 2:50 PM PDT; Last modified: November 22, 2007 12:16 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.0 Overall Rank: 8164 Comments:
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edpeterson @ 68.79.25.15
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12-May-04/3:04 PM
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that is the smelliest poem ever written. 10
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titan69 @ 62.31.23.164
> edpeterson
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12-May-04/3:13 PM
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Tell me about it!!
I'm sorry but I don't vote on lewds -no vote-
I thought you of all people would have enjoyed
some finger pie. what is lewd anyway?
Why does the poem have a line through it?
The bottom bit is a moral sort of thing
Congratulations on posting the worst title on this site since SupremeDreamer's "Ravings of a Dreamer"!
thank you
The title of this poem implies one of two things - firstly a pie full of fingers - that would be grotesque, or secondly some form of instruction where you would have to literally finger a pie.
The poem however appears to be about putting a child to bed. This poem is confused and poorly written and you may not have noticed but their is a large irrelevant line in the middle. This all leads me to believe that you are a stultified quim.
This pome has nothing to do with putting a child to bed
you daft cunt. finger a pie, pie full of fingers you have to gess what the pie is, get it!
(A women)?
No next gess
Jason Biggs?
who the fuck is jason biggs?
the fucking "American Pie" guy.
sorry never heard of him over hear!
we do have a pie tom though?
Don't know pie tom....
Go to WWW.yorksview.co.uk click on Trivia look down the list for pie tom. that goes for anyone else to who my be reading this?
American Pie was on general release in the UK you dunce.
yes I know but i never went to see it.
Hairy pie. this is fantastic. a woman under the covers never ages. i bet there's loads of "poets" on this site wish they'd wrote that line. Stunning.
yes it is a great line iznt it!!!
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