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FINGER PIE (Free verse) by titan69

When we are in bed at night. And I put my arm around you. When my finger tips touch your soft skin. When I get up close and slowly move in. To me it always seems like the first time, that first kiss. =========================================== As you will see. A women under the covers in the dark. never ages.??

the codeine kid 2-Jun-04/1:55 PM
Hairy pie. this is fantastic. a woman under the covers never ages. i bet there's loads of "poets" on this site wish they'd wrote that line. Stunning.




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