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28-Mar-04/8:24 PM |
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Didn't the Ramones write this...
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28-Mar-04/8:48 PM |
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| Re: Watching The Rose Grow by Blindpoetry |
31-Mar-04/6:37 PM |
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You did fore the rhyme, but still it flows well.
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| Re: A Dangling Poo by zodiac |
31-Mar-04/7:22 PM |
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31-Mar-04/9:32 PM |
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This is great. As a person who works with mental patients, I can say bravo. (I think I've read this before, though....is it an edit?)
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1-Apr-04/12:25 PM |
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I'm not good at math so I'm just gonna give this a 10 since it sounded pretty cool.
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| Re: hands by New Life Drug |
1-Apr-04/12:37 PM |
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| Re: How does it feel? by OfaRevolutionAJD |
1-Apr-04/8:59 PM |
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Sorry, but the way you have this structured makes it hard to read....
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| Re: A Special K by OfaRevolutionAJD |
1-Apr-04/9:02 PM |
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You should send this to Creed...I bet they'd buy it.
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| Re: Cargo pants by tre |
2-Apr-04/12:42 PM |
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This is a cute little story..
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| Re: Price of an Affair by sonawrote |
2-Apr-04/7:49 PM |
-2 for self-loathing
+8 for self-loathing
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| Re: It Won't Last Long by Spindle |
2-Apr-04/7:50 PM |
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At first, I thought this was about joining the Army and going through boot camp....
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2-Apr-04/7:52 PM |
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Although you misspelled 'invisible', I think this is pretty damn good.
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| Re: Wartner by unouluvme |
2-Apr-04/7:55 PM |
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| Re: Alive within the sound of life by Prince of Void |
5-Apr-04/6:50 PM |
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Not a bad poem, but I think that you need to incest in Microsoft Word simply for the spell-checker. I've found that it helps!
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| Re: Diary by wilco |
5-Apr-04/8:49 PM |
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This used to have a cool little off kilter structure but the poemranker submit box would'nt let me do it....stupid poemranker submit box.....
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| Re: Over you by tre |
6-Apr-04/1:24 PM |
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| Re: A Quick Lick Of Yellow by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
6-Apr-04/1:34 PM |
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nice. You don't hear much about old Ra and Osiris these days...I wonder what they're up to?
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6-Apr-04/7:22 PM |
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hmmmmm, vedy intewesting.
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