| Re: SEASON OF WINTER by galaxy4unknown |
8-Apr-04/6:29 AM |
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Yes, you need to fix the spelling errors, and I would not use "thou" so much (if at all).
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8-Apr-04/5:18 PM |
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Usually, I really like your stuff...but I'm just not feeling this one, sorry.
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8-Apr-04/7:00 PM |
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Hmmmm, strangely I do like this better....
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| Re: La théologie pour les Politiciens by wilco |
8-Apr-04/7:15 PM |
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I can't believe I've gotten no "guffs" and no irate rants from Zodiac....feeling left out....
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9-Apr-04/10:00 PM |
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I dig this man. It's good.
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| Re: Three Bears by hotwire |
9-Apr-04/10:03 PM |
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YEs, it is different but the grammatical errors to make it a little hard to read in places.
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| Re: On the Theme of Melted Pianos by embersandenvelopes |
9-Apr-04/10:10 PM |
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I kind of like this.....very....abstract?
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11-Apr-04/2:01 PM |
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I think Dave Matthews did this a little better in Dancing Nancies. Keep working on it, though...still a good idea...
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11-Apr-04/2:08 PM |
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This sounds like a collage of all the shit that Zodiac has said about you. Self-loathing, while it makes for good literary fodder, should not be overused and NEVER let them know that they're getting to you.
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11-Apr-04/2:12 PM |
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11-Apr-04/2:16 PM |
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13-Apr-04/1:30 PM |
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Definitely one of your best.
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14-Apr-04/8:08 PM |
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15-Apr-04/3:29 PM |
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Beautiful. Especially for those of us who live in TN.
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| Re: Riding High On My Ignore List by horus8 |
15-Apr-04/3:41 PM |
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I don't really get a lot of it either, but it's funny as hell.
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17-Apr-04/11:57 AM |
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Diseases of the mind are so much worse than those of the body...
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| Re: Do You Like It by hotwire |
18-Apr-04/7:52 PM |
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As a man, I cannot help but give this a 10.
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| Re: nonsense by sarah |
18-Apr-04/8:05 PM |
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This is a good idea and a good poem. To be nitpicky, though, I think you mean Rorschach.
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19-Apr-04/12:39 PM |
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Not your best, but still good and I like it.
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20-Apr-04/4:15 PM |
Some good sentiments here. You might want to fix this though..."like Iâll will never die."
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