| Re: Loneliness by tuthaliash |
20-Apr-04/5:20 PM |
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| Re: Exclamatory Abuse by Blindpoetry |
24-Apr-04/7:26 PM |
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| Re: She Searches For Love by validus_vox |
25-Apr-04/8:12 AM |
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I was going to give this a 7 until I read the comments and saw what it is about. For what it's worth, I think you should try the above suggestion and try rewriting it and trying to find the "right" words (I didn't get that it was a mentally ill girl until the comments). Still, it's not bad at all.
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| Re: Mental Escape by validus_vox |
25-Apr-04/8:15 AM |
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Yes, some punctuation would definitely make this better.
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25-Apr-04/11:03 AM |
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27-Apr-04/6:57 PM |
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28-Apr-04/2:30 PM |
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| Re: Horses by ggawrysi |
28-Apr-04/2:34 PM |
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Kinda reminds me (with the numbers) of the old Houghton-Mifflin anthologies from high school.
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| Re: castle of pandas part II. by FreeFormFixation |
2-May-04/8:32 AM |
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An 8. Simply for being different and amusing.
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2-May-04/9:29 AM |
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2-May-04/4:00 PM |
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Paying $25 to slosh around in the mud and rain and the only thing that you get to see is Jerry Lee Lewis perform "Great Balls of Fire". Now that's absurd.
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| Re: Black Belt by etherealmaiden |
2-May-04/4:01 PM |
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This seems to be a statement on anorexia nervosa, no?
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2-May-04/4:04 PM |
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I don't much care for the month of May, myself (except for the fifteenth...oh, and the twenty-third, those days are, ok). Good one.
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3-May-04/11:36 AM |
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| Re: Gothic by zodiac |
3-May-04/11:43 AM |
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This is a rather somber story, if I'm understanding it correctly.
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4-May-04/1:57 PM |
Not as pleased with this one as some of your others. I do like this though - All that is left to do now is sit, write, and smoke, - because smoking is fun and so is sitting.
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| Re: The Influence of Anxiety by Nicholas Jones |
4-May-04/2:04 PM |
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It is an essay with line breaks, but you make some good points.
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4-May-04/2:06 PM |
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and again I must surrender high marks to you, oh master of the (typed) word.
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4-May-04/4:12 PM |
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sad, and unfortunately, very common I think.
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4-May-04/6:20 PM |
"Did you ever notice that anyone driving more slowly than you is an idiot, and anyone driving faster than you is a maniac?"
-George Carlin
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