| Re: a comment on The Coming Light by poetandknowit |
22-Jan-03/10:42 AM |
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Tell dear limonade that I wish her a fond farewell and all the best, and that I will think nothing but the warmest thoughts of our brief time spent together although I shall do it with a broken heart.
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| Re: Remember by NinjaPoet |
22-Jan-03/8:24 AM |
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| Re: quarantine agenda by crin |
22-Jan-03/8:10 AM |
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| Re: 1969 by w~* ATHENA *~w |
22-Jan-03/12:17 AM |
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| Re: To Find the Words by loneshadow29 |
22-Jan-03/12:13 AM |
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Awwwwww. Sweet. Have you run out and fallen in love. Paxil is the secret to success
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| Re: a comment on poemrancour by JakeBike |
21-Jan-03/12:14 PM |
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Excuse me kind sir, but I do indeede own the copyright on this. See patent #58316251, section 16, verse 7, sentence three. So I must ask you to either put a trademark symbol after it, put it in quotations with a footnote and biographical reference to myself, or simply send me USD26.37 for the usage fee. I accept cash, check, visa, and mastercard. Thank you sir. I appreciate your cooperation in advance.
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| Re: a comment on No future by Freethinker1602 |
17-Jan-03/1:13 PM |
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This coming from the king of mindless self parody. Obviously, you failed to read the poem. So, fuck you, turkey.
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| Re: The Poop Machines by dougsoderstrom |
16-Jan-03/10:43 PM |
Duh. So we need a college educated man to spell it out for the masses? Is that it? Please, what was your purpose in writing this.
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| Re: Turmoil by ThoughtfulSoul |
16-Jan-03/10:31 PM |
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Nice sentiment. Bad poem.
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| Re: Life As a Boat by dougsoderstrom |
16-Jan-03/10:30 PM |
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| Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof |
16-Jan-03/10:30 PM |
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Maybe it is because I have never had the pleasure of going to a men's bathing pond, but that first image confuses me to no end. Can you explain it?
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| Re: Ouch by heroditus |
16-Jan-03/10:27 PM |
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Is this a haiku or a proverb? Either way it would hurt.
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| Re: Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin |
16-Jan-03/10:04 PM |
Are you talking about Ed Gein?
anyway...
You need serious help
this poem isn't worth the time and effort you spent to think up....
an moral impression of wasted space
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| Re: No future by Freethinker1602 |
16-Jan-03/9:58 PM |
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Pimple poem, super sized!
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| Re: Drunk Satan by smlink84 |
16-Jan-03/9:49 PM |
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| Re: a comment on All you can eat by flatliner |
16-Jan-03/1:55 PM |
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I'm eating pork rinds and doughnuts, glazed with chocolate frosting right now, baby. I will have another two pounds on before dinnertime.
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| Re: All you can eat by flatliner |
16-Jan-03/1:51 PM |
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You also have a poem called "overweight." Are you fat? I weigh 316 pounds and have to buy two seats when I fly American Airlines. Anyway, I like the title and was excited to read the poem, but was a bit disappointed how you used the extended metaphor. So much for bringing expectations to something.
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| Re: a comment on <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/12:55 PM |
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What a menacing last line. Gardner was pure talent. I miss him. It is also one of the few books you will read where a first person narrator dies. James Dickey's "To the White Sea", being another I remember off the top of my head. It is such an odd technique thing to utilize in a book.
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| Re: <{Grasping^Grendals}> by Bachus |
16-Jan-03/11:35 AM |
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Have you read "Grendal" by John Gardner?
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| Re: Anchored pockets by INTRANSIT |
14-Jan-03/11:18 PM |
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Another adverbial clause. They are everywhere. You know, Intransit, I am proud of you. You are up to 13 poems now and have yet to pull them all off.
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