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To Find the Words (Free verse) by loneshadow29
if one wish could be granted tonight may it be to find the words to capture every moment indeed the very essence of the boundless love within my heart many a countless night I have spent shedding tears of pure joy tears never shed once until she came into my life I lie here, savoring each and every moment feeling my heart burst with the love for whom I searched for so long the woman who will forever hold my heart still wishing, hoping, praying that I may find the words to truly speak of this overwhelming feeling inside so that she may know how she makes me feel and how the once lonely shadow found the light that only she could bring to him hopefully, I'll find the words soon enough

Up the ladder: Untimely Demise
Down the ladder: Too Nearly Remembered

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.25
Weighted score: 4.7913947
Overall Rank: 11218
Posted: January 21, 2003 11:30 PM PST; Last modified: January 21, 2003 11:30 PM PST
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[0] poetandknowit @ 65.101.211.92 | 22-Jan-03/12:13 AM | Reply
Awwwwww. Sweet. Have you run out and fallen in love. Paxil is the secret to success
[n/a] loneshadow29 @ 67.30.229.118 > poetandknowit | 23-Jan-03/11:44 AM | Reply
nah, I've been in love with the greatest woman I've ever known. And antidepressants maybe the key to success for quite a few people, I beat it on my own... no drugs needed. Thanks for the comment though :o)
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