| Re: a comment on For you, I'd make meatloaf by Venus |
14-Feb-03/10:22 AM |
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| Re: Fall by morffrom |
3-Oct-02/12:02 AM |
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| Re: Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof |
2-Oct-02/11:58 PM |
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| Re: Noblesse Oblige by Christof |
2-Oct-02/11:41 PM |
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| Re: The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit |
2-Oct-02/11:39 PM |
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| Re: Fraternity by Christof |
2-Oct-02/11:37 PM |
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| Re: Conversations with a Clock II by morffrom |
2-Oct-02/11:36 PM |
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| Re: Liberty bells & Disney Land by horus8 |
2-Oct-02/11:20 PM |
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| Re: Wednesday's Breaking by poetandknowit |
2-Oct-02/11:18 PM |
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| Re: Variance of the tapeworm by horus8 |
31-Aug-02/3:07 PM |
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Yeah, fucking hypocrites! Nice jab, h. 9/10! How about another line, beginning with 'If you're such a poet....... '
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| Re: A journey to the sun by kawakurdi |
31-Aug-02/2:49 PM |
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Reminds me of a Third Eye Blind song called 'Wounded', which I really dig. Not sure about the 'Hooray, hooray, hooray' bit, but great images and overall I like it very much. 9/10
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| Re: Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus |
31-Aug-02/1:32 PM |
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Shit, I can't stop now, my old buddy Axl is coming on soon, can't miss that... v luv b luv h luv b~y
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| Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus |
31-Aug-02/1:22 PM |
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Damn, those are good suggestions too. Wonder how many times I'll have to revise this thing before I get it...
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| Re: Award shows make my cock hard, but you don't by Bachus |
31-Aug-02/1:17 PM |
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How did I ever miss this little gem from the God of Spilled Wine??? You know, I paid a visit to Bacchus last year in Firenze - Michelangelo's version anyway - my favorite wino right up close and personal! Me-O-My! I was so inspired I drank three bottles of chianti that day (rather than the usual two). Just have the show on in the background right now, a train wreck I can't help but peek at. You make good observations, and hey, at least the show inspired you to write a piece. Thoughts so far: Pink - henna tats all over her body; faux ink - how telling. What's up with the token little white boy on stage with all the brothers, everyone pretending he can dance? The Hives - hey, isn't that Beck singing? Hmm, sure looks like Beck, moves like Beck, oh wait, no, can't be, cuz Beck is Prince, no wait, oh, fuck it, I'm confused... 7/10
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| Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8 |
31-Aug-02/12:31 PM |
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Indeed I'm a mad mongrel mix like yourself - Russian & Greek from Mom's side, French & Indian from Dad's... your basic lover/fighter mixed breed. The lemono is my specialty all-winter-long soup, makes me feel all warm and snuggly during those cold and snowy Colorado winters. Just getting around to watching the music awards finally - oh that little Marshall Mathers, ya gotta love him! h luv v.
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| Re: Terror Too Tranquil by RaychelW |
31-Aug-02/7:47 AM |
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Your poems have an easy flow. This is good work. 8/10
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| Re: Billy Bytack Forces His Children To Sell Jesus by horus8 |
31-Aug-02/7:37 AM |
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I have indeed succumbed - it was that German chocolate cake what made me do it! BTW, here's a slight twist to try on your next batch of Avgolemono - add fresh chopped parsley to the broth and rice prior to adding the eggs (nice color splash & enhanced flavor), and use the juice of TWO lemons... mmm mmm, lemono good! And thanks for the compliment on my hair, I really was having a 'great hair day' yesterday. Hope they do a good job on your cut ; ) 8/10
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| Re: The boy who shot birds by Bachus |
30-Aug-02/3:39 PM |
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This is great stuff - grrrrrreat! Thought-provoking commentary with a perfect opening companion piece of poetry. I hear you loud and clear. And I hate that fucker, too. 9/10
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| Re: Women by Prosper |
30-Aug-02/3:25 PM |
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Too many spelling errors, and the lack of line breaks is frustrating as hell. Consider editing.
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| Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus |
30-Aug-02/1:52 PM |
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Z - took your initial suggestions, thanks again!
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