Re: Confessor's Nightcap by Limness	30-Aug-02/12:24 PM
I like your style - it's very underrated so far - I can't be the only one, can I? 7/10
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	30-Aug-02/12:09 PM
DA - I thought it was poemwanker, but what does that have to do with anything anyway? I rank, I comment, I do my little duty.
Re: An Introduction by 1Sapphire1	30-Aug-02/11:52 AM
Both sweet and sad - I like. 7/10
Re: Fetch by Limness	29-Aug-02/11:19 PM
I hope they don't run out, elsen I'll be in some big trouble! 7/10
Re: Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit	29-Aug-02/10:40 PM
These are fantastic, from one who's been there. I'll give it a 10/10 to make up for anything you may have lost in the revisions.
Re: Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/10:36 PM
Kristen - you have potential, keep working on it. And if you want some true critique and help, there are some wonderful poets that can help you on this site. Just ask them for help. Specifically, zzinnia and god's wife can be very helpful to struggling poets in the mist.
Re: Thousand Tears by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/10:26 PM
Girlfriend, please don't say that you would really die a horrible death over some guy - that just ain't right. I do understand that it feels that way now, but someday... someday, when you are a little bit older, you'll know that the statement is ridiculous.
Re: All Around Me by brazen	29-Aug-02/10:14 PM
Go outside and play, will ya?
Re: A Hard Lesson Learned by kristenk69lover	29-Aug-02/10:11 PM
Kristen - God and Men have absolutely nothing to do with one another.
Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus	29-Aug-02/4:54 PM
Thanks GW, and I think you may know what I'm talking about... hint: keep your mind in the gutter, where it belongs! Mine seems to thrive down there ; )
Re: Escapism by vulcan	29-Aug-02/9:43 AM
Yep, I feel like this some days, too. 8/10
Re: saving myself for marriage by Venus	29-Aug-02/9:41 AM
DA - I reckon 'cries' would be grammatically correct, but I just liked the short sound of 'cry' - thanks for the legitimate criticism though.
Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus	27-Aug-02/11:44 PM
Thanks! I'll consider those, and maybe come up with some kind of amalgamation tomorrow... must crawl into bed for now, as I'm keeping the house awake with all of my deafening 'hunt & peck'ing ; )
Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus	27-Aug-02/11:32 PM
Z! You nailed the exact two lines I was fighting with! I'll take your musings and run! Oh, and yes, you nailed the motivation behind it as well.
Re: Horseflies and Mayflies, Incessant Today by Christof	27-Aug-02/11:24 PM
Wow, this is a really moving piece. You really have a knack for telling big stories using the fewest possible words - the true beauty of poetry. 10/10
Re: Work by poetandknowit	27-Aug-02/10:51 PM
This is one tasty ditty; a pleasure to read. I appreciate the stream of consciousness style sans meandering. Blue and tight! 9/10
Re: Esplanade by Wulf	27-Aug-02/10:14 PM
Does the word Esplanade represent Mother Earth here? Not sure I can put all of this together, but some of these lyrics are fantastic. 7/10
Re: Blind by shwenatjadeflower	27-Aug-02/9:40 PM
Hmmm... I've dated guys like this before, pains in the arses in my opinion - but I've never been much for the 'eyes wide shut' types. The poem has some good emotion, and I especially like the line "Promises are little white lies that are forgotten over time" - how true. I would continue to tighten it up. 6/10
Re: Window poems by kawakurdi	22-Aug-02/4:46 PM
This is absolutely beautiful. I'm normally rather cynical when it comes to straightforward 'love poems', but this one moved me - Bravo! 10/10
Re: Dark Lady by quantumenterprises	22-Aug-02/3:55 PM
I'm still laughing, I absolutely love this! At first I thought it was about sleep (yawn), but no, that's fantastic. While my preferred sleepmate is the red, red, wine, I still say 9/10 for the loving, and might I say, bittersweet ode.