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Escapism (Free verse) by vulcan
I worked hard today
And came back home...
Rather late;
A woman opened a door
I entered and heard
Thin voices crying...or giggling?
"Children are hungry!"the woman said.
What the hell she meant?I wondered.
She put some food before me
Something hot,Damned hot!
I got up to get some fresh air
Somewhere not there;
The woman stopped me short,
Pointed to the...
Thin-voiced gnomes
And said
"I need money!"
I stumbled over something
Sank in a chair
And covered my face.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3809
Posted: August 25, 2002 11:19 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 11:13 PM PDT
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