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Escapism (Free verse) by vulcan
I worked hard today And came back home... Rather late; A woman opened a door I entered and heard Thin voices crying...or giggling? "Children are hungry!"the woman said. What the hell she meant?I wondered. She put some food before me Something hot,Damned hot! I got up to get some fresh air Somewhere not there; The woman stopped me short, Pointed to the... Thin-voiced gnomes And said "I need money!" I stumbled over something Sank in a chair And covered my face.

Up the ladder: Reflected, Dreamed
Down the ladder: you from above

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3809
Posted: August 25, 2002 11:19 PM PDT; Last modified: August 26, 2002 11:13 PM PDT
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Comments:
[0] bdub420 @ 65.239.18.219 | 26-Aug-02/5:57 AM | Reply
what a pussy way out, stand up and show her where your balls are!!!!
[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 27-Aug-02/1:00 AM | Reply
Damn smart. finally 8/10!@
[7] <~> @ 167.206.181.179 | 27-Aug-02/6:24 AM | Reply
detatched, but not all the way gone. i get the feeling he's planning the trip though. liked it.
[8] Venus @ 198.81.26.167 | 29-Aug-02/9:43 AM | Reply
Yep, I feel like this some days, too. 8/10
[7] cpill @ 81.179.110.224 | 24-Apr-05/1:27 PM | Reply
poor bastard
[5] cyan9 @ 62.253.128.14 | 26-Sep-05/12:46 PM | Reply
Too True
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