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you from above (Free verse) by daniella
aren't we just the perfect prophets
we both knew us to be?
realized this dream
which lived its course,
as if we did not foresee?
and they followed through
with our truest premonitions,
casting us without grace
into a sea of absolute admonitions.
but who are we to doubt
the consequences therein,
huddled amongst ourselves in a mass,
a bundle of the basest sin?
i will take in all the blame
and admit to loving you... in shame.
but honoured by the purest breath
and heightened, lengthened and taken a breadth.
with you, through you, under you, beside myself
i am who He brought me to be in you.
for this to only you be true.
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Weighted score: 5.2689414
Overall Rank: 3810
Posted: October 26, 2002 10:43 AM PDT; Last modified: October 26, 2002 10:43 AM PDT
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