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Fall (Lyric) by morffrom Mists and frosts rhyme,
Winds that cut,
Too much water all the time,
Leaves are scarlet, red,
Doors are shut,
Nothing said,
Everything
Dead.
Up the ladder:
Wind By Any Other Name
Down the ladder:
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Posted: September 19, 2002 5:41 AM PDT; Last modified: September 19, 2002 5:41 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.4064 Overall Rank: 3087 Comments:
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dolores @ 213.122.155.154
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19-Sep-02/6:10 AM
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Ain't that the truth though
Concise and punchy-10/10
'Mists and frosts rhyme' is damn good. The rest leaves to be desired.
9/10
Short and sweet but it doesn't do much for me personally. Still, not bad and with an interesting theme.
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