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Fall (Lyric) by morffrom

Mists and frosts rhyme, Winds that cut, Too much water all the time, Leaves are scarlet, red, Doors are shut, Nothing said, Everything Dead.

Tintagiles 25-Sep-02/9:04 PM
'Mists and frosts rhyme' is damn good. The rest leaves to be desired.




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