Re: Baked Peach Cobbler Windowed by horus8	18-Sep-02/10:18 PM
Ah the verbal gymnastics you put my neurons through. Personal trainer. Arsenal drainer. Rubber neck craner. Vegetable strainer. Confort zone maimer. Pinchi Cavrone.
Re: a comment on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas	18-Sep-02/10:04 PM
I don't just rank all your stuff low. (Nice English) I read your submission and give my opinion and/or vote. I wish you would critique my work. By the way, I'm no lady.
Re: Operation: Nielsens by bondjedi	18-Sep-02/6:31 PM
I love this kind of untouched snapshot, although the last line doesn't quite finish the set up of the 1st 2.
Re: Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8	17-Sep-02/10:31 PM
You stun and amaze. A tonic for the ills of reading ugly navel lint poems. Praise Isis.
Re: Meaning by Ojiboch	17-Sep-02/10:07 PM
This is void of meaning. Line 6, your slip is showing.
Re: a comment on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit	17-Sep-02/8:03 AM
He's not around and I must leave. Instant gratification, add hot water, stir. I like the title.
Re: NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD by horus8	17-Sep-02/7:56 AM
Jesus Christ! An abudance of imaginative expression. It's difficult to leave you comments. I'm usually overwhelmed by your imagery and the accuracy of your observation. This one especially.
Re: a comment on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit	17-Sep-02/7:44 AM
Zeenie, please explain. Is it that he can't it the honey because of the inherent state of hostility amongst the producers?
Re: Eternal Sleep by Artificial_Sweetner	16-Sep-02/8:49 PM
"lifes never been swell" gets a 0 and destroys all hope.
Re: Prisoner Of Reality by rottweiler1982	16-Sep-02/8:46 PM
Poetic justice? Typos. Reality has little to due with the punishment of sin. Reality punishes the good as well as the bad. She's not prejudice. Prisoner of Regret. Not horrible, but no grab. Rice cake poem.
Re: A black sanded tropical vision by horus8	16-Sep-02/8:35 PM
I sense aloof pain. Which is a man's territory. "That 5 yr old's shadow stretches on" Truth.
Re: a comment on Morning Conversation by lexicon	16-Sep-02/6:11 PM
As I said it's just a predilection of mine.
Re: a comment on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	16-Sep-02/6:04 PM
I would tend to agree with you {--=Doylum=--}, but in extreme cases it's an option. Kind of like abortion. His comments are hurtful, yes hurtful. Best to delete the malignancy.
Re: a comment on lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	16-Sep-02/5:57 PM
You know you can delete Mr. shit-angels comments by pressing clicking on the red x.
Re: lovely by pink_punk_kisses87	16-Sep-02/5:42 PM
Who is this person? Start there. mother, sister, friend. Watch can become so many other things; attend, regard, mark, glimpse, etc... use a thesaurus it's your best friend. You'll hear some idiots spout stupidities about the illegitimacy of using one. Don't listen. All good poets use them. Infact try to find an old used thesaurus that isn't organized alphabetically. Take to reading it. That's an education. " I mark your sleep. The lovely brown of your hair./ Your hands like..... It takes hours upon hours to work out a poem. The ones that come spontaneously are gifts, and have little to do witht he writers craft. Don't give up.
Re: I hate people by Bazilla	16-Sep-02/3:04 PM
I don't hate you, but I hate this poem. Stop wasting time beating the air. Not to mention this lacks anyhting resembling charm
Re: Mountain Ash, Mid Glamorgan by Nicholas Jones	16-Sep-02/2:23 PM
More than like, I love. 10 fully earned.
Re: a comment on On waiting to pick up my daughter on Tuesday by poetandknowit	16-Sep-02/1:25 PM
Are you raising the babes solo?
Re: God and Country by dougsoderstrom	16-Sep-02/7:34 AM
Amen. Excellent. Folk-art at it's very best. May I print and share?
Re: crispy by skaskowski	15-Sep-02/10:22 PM
why's it called crispy if it's crunchy? S.O.g.