Re: a comment on Fleas by bigbigdog	20-Sep-02/9:55 AM
What does this have to do with a God complex? Your friend has discredited himself by posting nothing except a well known poem by a well loved poet which he atributes to himself. To the skilled eye, and there are many on this sight, this reveals a disrespect not only for our dear Mr. Nash, but also for this forum. His action also reveals an excess of stupidity. Is he stupid enough to believe we wouldn't recognize the poem or is he stupid enough to believe this would be funny? What is the bases of your defense for this moron? Friendship? Not good enough. Plagirism, no matter how ill excecuted is unexceptable through out our society. Why is he here? He has posted no work of his own, and the only comment he has left was a direct attack on a poet who confronted his criminal act. Yes, criminal. Look it up. You 2 yuck it up all you like, but it only serves to prove how socially inept you both are, and how much you still have yet to learn. poet&knowit takes a lot of pride in what he does for a living. He is a writer. One of his beloved fellow writers was taken atvantage of. He has every right to defend his mentor's honor.
Re: My Mamma's Hands by amateurR	19-Sep-02/4:30 PM
Not bad. Not good but not bad. There's no emotion. I going to a Dodger game and then I'm camping all weekend. Talk with you on Monday.
Re: Eight by amateurR	19-Sep-02/4:26 PM
This lacks compassion. It's scary which is good but you need to develop your characters more. Read 'No Angel Came"
Re: a comment on Seasonal Lover by amateurR	19-Sep-02/4:24 PM
Is there a word for going away and coming back? Would fickle due?
Re: a comment on Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87	19-Sep-02/4:22 PM
Yes. Have you read any books of poetry? Which ones?
Re: Fleas by bigbigdog	19-Sep-02/10:37 AM
go away.
Re: a comment on Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:50 AM
Oh.
Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:46 AM
Don't fool yourself, everything is meaningful. Even a good crap. Especially a good crap.
Re: a comment on Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:44 AM
What's with all the tugging?
Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:40 AM
Also, I think the poet is always a tourist. That's why we're able to write. I like you admitting to it.
Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:38 AM
I like the fist line. It sets the scene. I don't have to waste brain time extracting it from the rest of the poem.
Re: a comment on Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:30 AM
Wow, I literally pictured you with a curly-top toddler on your lap and the not so much older children sitting on the floor around you laughing at your stories. The beautiful wifey admiring the scene from the kitchen door(mixing spoon in hand) Go figure.
Re: Gone Away by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:22 AM
I send you internet kisses.
Re: Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:20 AM
Are you the one woman, sympathetic family man type?
Re: Musings from the LTD by w~* ATHENA *~w	19-Sep-02/8:16 AM
I went to the Levi 25 yrs of Punkorama last weekend. Took the boy, had loads of fun. I don't understand the last line. {?} at the end of the L6 looks awkward.
Re: Glassblowers by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:06 AM
Much tastier. I can't afford it either, but I'm the bull in the china shop.
Re: Circle by Christof	19-Sep-02/8:04 AM
You know for someone who poopoos the marital state, you sure write about it a lot.
Re: Seasonal Lover by amateurR	18-Sep-02/11:23 PM
Nature is unfaithful? to the seasons? That's absurd, she returns each year at the designated hour. Use an analogy that works.
Re: You're the Only One by Chels85	18-Sep-02/10:51 PM
The sentiment of the last 3 couplets is so beautiful, but this needs reconstructive surgery. The whole "you're the only one" line needs to be dropped. It's been used to death. Most of this is pretty bad. It's a vocal desert.
Re: Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87	18-Sep-02/10:29 PM
I'm curious, what books of poetry do 15 yr olds read these days? Seriously.