| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/1:41 PM |
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You're so predictable. I don't have to look things up, well sometimes to make sure I'm not mis-spelling them. The words I used are far from big. Trinity Juvenile Fatuity. Are you home schooled? Does your fundamentalist mommy waiver between punishing you to keep you out of the eternal pit and licking your genitals? Hard to get an adequate education under those conditions.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/1:32 PM |
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You're such an ass, nentwined was reply to someone else. You are clearly clueless. The 3rd incarnation of juvenile expression. The Trinity of Fatuity is now complete. I await your miserable attempt at rebuttal.
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| Re: a comment on Tugboats by poetandknowit |
20-Sep-02/10:54 AM |
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My God even your comments are well worn cliches. Can you not claim authorship to anything you write?
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| Re: On waiting to pick up my lover on Friday by bigbigdog |
20-Sep-02/10:45 AM |
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| Re: Persephone by Lynn |
20-Sep-02/10:35 AM |
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Wow this really is gorgeous. Great images, told in voice of a young woman. The relationships between her and the other actors are fully developed. This is fine. Reminds me of Ann Sexton's Transformations. Have you read them?
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| Re: a comment on Fleas by bigbigdog |
20-Sep-02/10:23 AM |
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Joke: A remark, story or action intended to evoke laughter. Not to be confused with laughingstock: an object of ridicule, as in: You and your friend are totally unaware that you are becoming the laughingstocks of this site.
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| Re: a comment on Fleas by bigbigdog |
20-Sep-02/9:55 AM |
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What does this have to do with a God complex? Your friend has discredited himself by posting nothing except a well known poem by a well loved poet which he atributes to himself. To the skilled eye, and there are many on this sight, this reveals a disrespect not only for our dear Mr. Nash, but also for this forum. His action also reveals an excess of stupidity. Is he stupid enough to believe we wouldn't recognize the poem or is he stupid enough to believe this would be funny? What is the bases of your defense for this moron? Friendship? Not good enough. Plagirism, no matter how ill excecuted is unexceptable through out our society. Why is he here? He has posted no work of his own, and the only comment he has left was a direct attack on a poet who confronted his criminal act. Yes, criminal. Look it up. You 2 yuck it up all you like, but it only serves to prove how socially inept you both are, and how much you still have yet to learn. poet&knowit takes a lot of pride in what he does for a living. He is a writer. One of his beloved fellow writers was taken atvantage of. He has every right to defend his mentor's honor.
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| Re: My Mamma's Hands by amateurR |
19-Sep-02/4:30 PM |
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Not bad. Not good but not bad. There's no emotion. I going to a Dodger game and then I'm camping all weekend. Talk with you on Monday.
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| Re: Eight by amateurR |
19-Sep-02/4:26 PM |
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This lacks compassion. It's scary which is good but you need to develop your characters more. Read 'No Angel Came"
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| Re: a comment on Seasonal Lover by amateurR |
19-Sep-02/4:24 PM |
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Is there a word for going away and coming back? Would fickle due?
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| Re: a comment on Why Is It When I...? by liljsmith87 |
19-Sep-02/4:22 PM |
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Yes. Have you read any books of poetry? Which ones?
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| Re: Fleas by bigbigdog |
19-Sep-02/10:37 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:50 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:46 AM |
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Don't fool yourself, everything is meaningful. Even a good crap. Especially a good crap.
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| Re: a comment on Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:44 AM |
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What's with all the tugging?
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| Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:40 AM |
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Also, I think the poet is always a tourist. That's why we're able to write. I like you admitting to it.
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| Re: a comment on Glassblowers by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:38 AM |
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I like the fist line. It sets the scene. I don't have to waste brain time extracting it from the rest of the poem.
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| Re: a comment on Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:30 AM |
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Wow, I literally pictured you with a curly-top toddler on your lap and the not so much older children sitting on the floor around you laughing at your stories. The beautiful wifey admiring the scene from the kitchen door(mixing spoon in hand) Go figure.
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| Re: Gone Away by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:22 AM |
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I send you internet kisses.
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| Re: Circle by Christof |
19-Sep-02/8:20 AM |
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Are you the one woman, sympathetic family man type?
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