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Prisoner Of Reality

Member since 2002 · Posted 16 Sep 2002 · 1 comment

Sleepless dreamless desperate and trapped. Sightless soundless all there is, is black. Thirsty, starving, body wrought with pain. Freezing, burning, it will never change. No end, no rest, nowhere left to go. Wining crying for pity on your soul. Endless conquest for your sanity. Shadow whisper you must follow me. Ruthless attacks on you will power. Senseless savage minutes like hours. Confused confined kept out and locked in. Haunted, hunted payment for your sins.

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[4] god'swife 16-Sep-02/8:46 PM Reply
Poetic justice? Typos. Reality has little to due with the punishment of sin. Reality punishes the good as well as the bad. She's not prejudice. Prisoner of Regret. Not horrible, but no grab. Rice cake poem.