| Re: simple silence by daniella |
14-Oct-02/11:50 PM |
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| Re: words our Father by daniella |
14-Oct-02/11:52 PM |
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This is perhaps too personal for me to appreciate. I lose myself towards the middle and continue lost til the end.
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| Re: choices unto death by daniella |
14-Oct-02/11:55 PM |
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God good they will. And try on your things while you're still breathing. They surely will. Last line is confusing to me, but what isn't this day.
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| Re: cornered invitation by daniella |
14-Oct-02/11:59 PM |
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You right like a boy on drugs. Good for you, excellent even.
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| Re: our morning bed by daniella |
15-Oct-02/12:05 AM |
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Please do not disappear. I need you here. The way a mule needs a steady and knowing kick. Love the title
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| Re: One Country by poetandknowit |
15-Oct-02/12:08 AM |
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Poetandknowit, why do you hoard your answers like they're bones? Please write. Real mail would be nice. You own my address, put a stamp on it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
15-Oct-02/12:43 AM |
What I want to know is 3 fold.
1.) Is the diner made unaware of the waffles nature prior to consumption, making him/her tragically ignorant of his immortally after the 1st bite and previous to the 2nd? Am I travelling from point A to point B and then again to point A without ever becoming conscience of it?
2.) Is the diner notified of the waffles power prior to ingestion, but so overcome by the overwhelming pleasure of said waffle that he/she cannot resist a 2nd bite? Is the waffle a metaphor for sex, drugs, and religion(otherwise known as rock n roll)?
3.) Is this an allegory of our masichistic nature?
Please help. I am up all night deciphering
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| Re: Rummage Sales by jessicazee |
15-Oct-02/9:28 AM |
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| Re: Bowed by <~> |
15-Oct-02/10:57 AM |
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You are too much a good thing. You strike at my heart, and I am grateful for it.
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| Re: I am Cuba by cacophony |
15-Oct-02/9:58 PM |
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Great beginnings. Heart murmur/clock is a terrific metaphor, whether politica, social or personal. The last stanza does not stand up to the intelligence of the first.
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| Re: like love in the movies by crin |
16-Oct-02/8:16 AM |
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The title is fantastic. I think I'll steal it. the poem itself I'm disappointed to say is cliche and predictable.
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| Re: going to lie with the devil by crin |
16-Oct-02/8:20 AM |
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"but I always betray myself....." is novel and good, leaving fingerprints is also a good image. The rest is boring. A conversation heard at the back of the bus.
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| Re: Homemade Greetings by jessicazee |
16-Oct-02/8:43 AM |
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Fanfuckintastic. I am clicking print.
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| Re: On a chill morning by razorgrin |
16-Oct-02/11:32 AM |
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
16-Oct-02/11:55 AM |
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This poem is a good reflection on the discussion I was having with Christof this a.m. This is one of my favorite poems, not just of yours, but ever. Substancial & etherial. Duality of my existence.
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| Re: Confessor's Nightcap by Limness |
16-Oct-02/1:12 PM |
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| Re: a genius by moonUnit |
16-Oct-02/1:16 PM |
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I can hear the beams failing at L13. Creeeeeeeak, splat!
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| Re: Devotion by Tyriana |
16-Oct-02/1:57 PM |
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Hey what happened? I left you a comment @ 45 min. ago.
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| Re: Choices by Ojiboch |
16-Oct-02/2:08 PM |
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Ask the flight attendant to bring you a blanket, and some hot cocoa. your Po-M is poopilicious.
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| Re: The obsessive compulsive sloth was a junkie by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
16-Oct-02/2:13 PM |
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7,000 dollars! 7,000 dollars! ( Hot Tamales are aero-dynamic) I'm glad I went to bed early that night.
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