Re: Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT	12-Oct-02/5:14 PM
The last image is the prize winner here. You probably know that already. I don't care for the hook line and sinker, except that it ties in with the last stanza. Could the cronies be fishing instead of butchering?
regarding some deleted poem...	12-Oct-02/11:53 PM
The thing I love best about soccer or football or futbol or what have you, is the combat. Men at full speed clashing into each other. As close as I'll get to this scenario. This is a very sexy poem. I am sick this way. I love blood and blows. How intimate and ultimate your heroes.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Oct-02/12:05 AM
It's not a matter of right or wrong, but bad or good. You have no idea what you're doing in this arena. Just because you can move it doesn't make you a dancer. Just because you know the words it doesn't mean you can sing. You are awful at writing poetry. The sooner you admit it, the faster your recovery. You're up against some stiff competition here. You are not right , you are blind. Open your eyes. You're an idiot when it comes to expessing yourself with the written word. You are insolent and unaware.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Oct-02/12:07 AM
Fuck you and your shitty poetry.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Oct-02/12:11 AM
How on earth do you have the balls to call yourself a poet?
Re: "REAL" People by Scouser	13-Oct-02/12:25 AM
You sorry little shit. You dare to write about democracy and then cram the ballot box with fake votes? You are a scumball. Best list my ass. You fall from the sky carrying a shit-pie and walk away with the blue-ribbon? I think not. I spit on you and your crappy poem. Your poem is not worthy enough to lick the shoes of my worst.
regarding some deleted poem...	13-Oct-02/4:32 PM
God loves it when I talk dirty.
Re: A poets call to arms by INTRANSIT	13-Oct-02/10:03 PM
I posted what i thought was a funny and well written commit, but then I submitted it under Horus8. I deleted the comment and now I can't come up with anything clever. I feel bad. I like being funny. I don't want a dead army. I don't understand your metaphor. Tickling the dead sounds gross. I don't want to do it.
Re: Introduction By Decree by Wulf	13-Oct-02/11:50 PM
Is the repetition intentional?
Re: Reptiles & Dust - Part One by Wulf	14-Oct-02/12:01 AM
My favorite of your poems. Many examples of the reach of your creativity. many many beautiful and truthful insights. I don't like the end. My favorite stanzas are 8,9 & 19. I know I will read this again.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/12:25 AM
Pero si no calmas los enojos. Me dejas ardiente, y deciendo el olvido. Cuantas veces en una sola vida sabre este dulce estar?
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/12:34 AM
"Siempre mientiendo amor" really speaks to my conscience right now. Love is so frgile and dependent on the actors to sustain the illusion. If one decides not to play along anymore, the illusion is broken. I love our back and forth. It is a creative and satisifing business.
Re: Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/8:11 AM
Overwhelmed by snowmen? Have been raised in So.Cal. I suppose I'm not one to judge really. That's one scary snowman.
Re: Two Towers by Tascobar	14-Oct-02/8:17 AM
I like this poem's subtlety. It works for me.
Re: Snow-White by vulcan	14-Oct-02/8:19 AM
Well, he''s dressed in sorrow, compares himself to death, and grieves for his soul.
Re: One Country by poetandknowit	14-Oct-02/8:46 AM
We are good together. Despite the logistics, you have mixed somehow with my blood. You capture my core. We have our affinity. I am grateful to find you here, and in a sweet and strange way, I love you.
Re: Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	14-Oct-02/12:50 PM
Your extraordinary gift for rhyme brings me great joy. Your stories are creative, funny and intelligently written. The shit theme is bizarre, but when it's well executed it's impossible complain. I always picture the most wonderful illustration when I read your tales, a la Mr. Gorey. Do you draw?
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Oct-02/12:53 PM
I don't get it. How does this tie in with control? Nice rhymning
regarding some deleted poem...	14-Oct-02/12:56 PM
This must be one of your thinking poems. I shall ponder your waffle.
Re: After Halloween by Limness	14-Oct-02/11:47 PM
Stanza 2 is so perfect in it's vocalization. Lovely and sweet. Like hard candy rolled around in my mouth. I am a connoiseur of intelligent sorrow. Birds of a feather and all that. Thank you for the bittersweet treat.