Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
17-May-05/6:45 PM |
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Re: Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:44 PM |
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
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Re: am i right? by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:39 PM |
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...
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Re: Sugar by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:38 PM |
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Re: famous by crooked_smile |
6-Apr-05/10:41 PM |
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Re: The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:34 AM |
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know.
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
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Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:32 AM |
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Re: A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:31 AM |
I really enjoyed this poem!!
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Re: a comment on Background Noise by Plaidypus |
28-Feb-05/7:31 AM |
At first I was hurt by this comment...then I read YOUR poetry, and realized you hadn't gone through puberty yet...
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Re: Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco |
14-Feb-05/9:02 PM |
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
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Re: a comment on Love Poem in HTML by Plaidypus |
14-Feb-05/8:59 PM |
How is one supposed to make any real progress if they never put themselves out there and try to experiment, once in a while? This is not necessarily a finished piece....furthermore, if you actually knew anything about HTML then you would find it amusing. I actually wrote this for a friend of mine who is an English major, and knows how to write code, and he loved it. The code puts is intended to put it into a sort of geeky, cyberspace context. I'm not saying its a work of genius, but I am DEFINITELY trying to do something original. I will NOT just "write the poem," thank you very much. All poetry sounds too similar...and I am trying something new.
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Re: Boston by Dovina |
15-Nov-04/3:32 PM |
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Re: Lemon Dream vs. Reality by TanHand |
1-Jan-04/1:37 PM |
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
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Re: I cant stand you by sk8rs_rule_all |
28-Dec-03/3:07 PM |
Awesome!! (Don't you think its a bit cruel, though? Don't tell me that YOU'VE never been rejected before by somebody you were crushing on...). Nonetheless, if you recategorized this as a pimple poem, its good shit.
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Re: secert love by crwncka1 |
24-Dec-03/9:19 AM |
You spelled "Secret" wrong.
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Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus |
22-Dec-03/10:23 PM |
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Re: Things Are Going to be Different Next Year by JanieDoe |
22-Dec-03/10:22 PM |
Huh...I like the ending. I think "smirk" is weak, you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. Your message is interesting enough.
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Re: Memory by Miggy |
22-Dec-03/10:14 PM |
What kind of music is this for?
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