Re: Memory by Miggy |
22-Dec-03/10:14 PM |
What kind of music is this for?
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Re: Things Are Going to be Different Next Year by JanieDoe |
22-Dec-03/10:22 PM |
Huh...I like the ending. I think "smirk" is weak, you shouldn't try so hard to rhyme. Your message is interesting enough.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
22-Dec-03/10:23 PM |
Do not ever use "proverbial" in a poem...its just a bad idea...
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Re: Intense Irrational Realities by Venus |
22-Dec-03/10:23 PM |
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Re: secert love by crwncka1 |
24-Dec-03/9:19 AM |
You spelled "Secret" wrong.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
25-Dec-03/10:43 AM |
I'm sorry, what did men sucking their own dicks have to do with the rest of the poem? Were you, you know, doing that....?
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Re: I cant stand you by sk8rs_rule_all |
28-Dec-03/3:07 PM |
Awesome!! (Don't you think its a bit cruel, though? Don't tell me that YOU'VE never been rejected before by somebody you were crushing on...). Nonetheless, if you recategorized this as a pimple poem, its good shit.
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Re: Lemon Dream vs. Reality by TanHand |
1-Jan-04/1:37 PM |
You should check into a nursing home. I'm sure you'd rapidly acquire an audience there.
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regarding some deleted poem... |
8-Jul-04/8:00 PM |
Hi, I am not sure this makes a very good poem, but let me say, I TOTALLY AGREE AND BELIEVE everything you said! :)
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Re: Boston by Dovina |
15-Nov-04/3:32 PM |
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Re: Bridesmaids in the Rain by wilco |
14-Feb-05/9:02 PM |
"Dancing with the (INSERT CLICHE)
Cliche, cliche, cliche
What rhymes with RAIN?
Cliche, cliche, Candy Cane
Cliche, cliche, vomit stain
dancing with the....ooops, I'm passing out from boredom....
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regarding some deleted poem... |
28-Feb-05/5:04 AM |
They probably AREN'T trying to be viewed as respectable.
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Re: A Fabrication by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:31 AM |
I really enjoyed this poem!!
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Re: The Pen by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:32 AM |
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Re: The 8th Day by whispern_smoke_wisp |
6-Mar-05/9:34 AM |
their should be spelled "there", just to let you know.
Also, "loose" should be "lose"
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Re: famous by crooked_smile |
6-Apr-05/10:41 PM |
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Re: Sugar by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:38 PM |
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Re: am i right? by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:39 PM |
You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...
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Re: Thereâs A Voice Deep Inside My Head by celticskatermatt1 |
17-May-05/6:44 PM |
All the lions are clawing at your guts right now, because they can't stand the fact that your work is more sincere than theirs. Thanks for remaining Un-pretentious. Hopefully they will start to pay more attention to the cocks up THEIR asses!!!
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Re: Malice In Wonderland (edited) by Caducus |
17-May-05/6:45 PM |
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