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Sugar (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1 i go to the store
my life is such a bore
i need some food
i need sugar dude!!!
i buy the candy bar
and eat while in the car
oh gosh my head feels funny
hey look!! theres a Bunny!!
what am i doing?
i shake will im chewing
sugar is my fav. passtime
but dont get sour bye eating a lime?
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Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2005 7:31 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.72186 Overall Rank: 11897 The following users have marked this poem on their favorites list:
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Plaidypus @ 198.7.247.203
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17-May-05/6:38 PM
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LOL this made my day.
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