poemranker ::Sugar by celticskatermatt1

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Free verse № 124913

Sugar

Member since 2004 · Posted 3 May 2005 · Edited 16 May 2005 · 1 comment

i go to the store my life is such a bore i need some food i need sugar dude!!! i buy the candy bar and eat while in the car oh gosh my head feels funny hey look!! theres a Bunny!! what am i doing? i shake will im chewing sugar is my fav. passtime but dont get sour bye eating a lime?

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[8] Plaidypus 17-May-05/6:38 PM Reply
LOL this made my day.