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Sugar (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1
i go to the store my life is such a bore i need some food i need sugar dude!!! i buy the candy bar and eat while in the car oh gosh my head feels funny hey look!! theres a Bunny!! what am i doing? i shake will im chewing sugar is my fav. passtime but dont get sour bye eating a lime?

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11914
Posted: May 3, 2005 2:29 PM PDT; Last modified: May 16, 2005 7:31 PM PDT
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[8] Plaidypus @ 198.7.247.203 | 17-May-05/6:38 PM | Reply
LOL this made my day.
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