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MY HEART REMEMBERS (Free verse) by massangel62
my heart is a mysterious organ it plays by it's own rule and though i'm trying really hard it won't let me get over you it remembers how you came into my life how you swept me off my feet how we spent all our time together lying in bed with you holding me your gentle kisses on my skin the soft touch of your hand your sweet voice in my ear told me you were one good man it remembers how you laid me down holding me gently in your arms then passionately making love to me as you turned on all your charms it remembers the walks we took in the dark and all the long talks we had things were really perfect for us so sid, how did it turn out so bad. Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.6666667
Weighted score: 4.72186
Overall Rank: 11925
Posted: July 29, 2004 7:39 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 7:39 PM PDT
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[n/a] -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. @ 81.86.113.159 | 30-Jul-04/2:02 AM | Reply
He probably looked in your "poetry diary" and realised what a horrible mistake he was about to make.

Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.130.62.63 | 30-Jul-04/1:56 PM | Reply
I came to read this because I thought your name was 'massangil' like the douche.
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