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MY HEART REMEMBERS (Free verse) by massangel62
my heart is a mysterious organ
it plays by it's own rule
and though i'm trying really hard
it won't let me get over you
it remembers how you came into my life
how you swept me off my feet
how we spent all our time together
lying in bed with you holding me
your gentle kisses on my skin
the soft touch of your hand
your sweet voice in my ear
told me you were one good man
it remembers how you laid me down
holding me gently in your arms
then passionately making love to me
as you turned on all your charms
it remembers the walks we took in the dark
and all the long talks we had
things were really perfect for us
so sid, how did it turn out so bad.
Copyright ©2004 Michele J Post
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Posted: July 29, 2004 7:39 PM PDT; Last modified: July 29, 2004 7:39 PM PDT
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