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am i right?

Member since 2004 · Posted 26 Apr 2005 · 4 comments

sometimes people look into your eyes and they wonder if your the one. wanting more and more once they look, fighting against love and hope will we ever see the truth? the one time my heart beats faster is for you.

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[4] Dovina 26-Apr-05/4:51 PM Reply

"will we/they ever see the truth?" is the most overused and senseless line in all of poesy.

[7] jessicazee 27-Apr-05/1:13 AM Reply

2nd line...should be "you're" instead of "your". You have so much feeling here...try to relate it to us in real language...pretend like you are telling your best friend how you feel in this poem in real words, instead of trying to "write a poem." Because I think you can. More, please.

[n/a] thepinkbunnyofdoom 27-Apr-05/9:55 PM Reply

Okay, a tip about poetry. Write like your on crack and seeing funny shit. In other words be inventive.

[n/a] Plaidypus 17-May-05/6:39 PM Reply

You are my favorite Poemranker poet, at this time. Why? Because you are just HONEST...