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am i right? (Free verse) by celticskatermatt1

sometimes people look into your eyes and they wonder if your the one. wanting more and more once they look, fighting against love and hope will we ever see the truth? the one time my heart beats faster is for you.

Dovina 26-Apr-05/4:51 PM
"will we/they ever see the truth?" is the most overused and senseless line in all of poesy.




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