on My Thoughts by amanda_dcosta
9 Mar 2009, 4:46 AM
you either know or you don't know.
on Redemption on the mat. by SupremeDreamer
6 Mar 2009, 8:07 PM
enjoyed the story.
replying on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined
6 Mar 2009, 5:07 AM
LOL. Yes, very strange.
replying on prove me wrong by nentwined
6 Mar 2009, 5:06 AM
haha A tale, it does feel like. Not sure I could convey what I'd want to say in a poem. I'm afraid my poetic side has suffered since... my last few poems I've written. lol I really should work on that, shouldn't I?
replying on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined
6 Mar 2009, 4:26 AM
I've thought exactly the same! Pretty often, actually.
And when do websites decide to call it quits? LJ, Myspace? Facebook? Holders of a million and one memories? Photos, journals, friendships?
And when do websites decide to call it quits? LJ, Myspace? Facebook? Holders of a million and one memories? Photos, journals, friendships?
on prove me wrong by nentwined
6 Mar 2009, 4:18 AM
I liked the title, "Prove Me Wrong" lol
I'd love to prove you wrong. One of these days. I'll come back and be all like... well, we'll see. ;)
Actually: I've never had certainty much. And innocence to the world went gone after a few months ago. hm...
I like how it's a list. And every last line goes together. :)
I'd love to prove you wrong. One of these days. I'll come back and be all like... well, we'll see. ;)
Actually: I've never had certainty much. And innocence to the world went gone after a few months ago. hm...
I like how it's a list. And every last line goes together. :)
replying on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry
6 Mar 2009, 4:10 AM
ah, okay. xD
Diplome = create, make, go for. Something like that. Did I make that word up? I think I did... haha oh well.
"Diplome yourself to bad luck" was meant to sort of say "you create all the bad things that happen to you and magnify it like it's the worst thing in the world." ... heh Something like that.
The last line was the reason I wrote it. :) Too bad the rest of the poem doesn't match up to it. lol
Diplome = create, make, go for. Something like that. Did I make that word up? I think I did... haha oh well.
"Diplome yourself to bad luck" was meant to sort of say "you create all the bad things that happen to you and magnify it like it's the worst thing in the world." ... heh Something like that.
The last line was the reason I wrote it. :) Too bad the rest of the poem doesn't match up to it. lol
replying on Fake, Emo and Over Shaven by Blindpoetry
6 Mar 2009, 3:55 AM
spell check probably didn't work for me at the time. Who knows. I meant soothe.
It's not a pimple because I remember the intention of this poem was to make fun of pimple. "Bleed with red dye" was supposed to say something like most emo kids crazy 'suffering' was their imagination and fake.
It's not a pimple because I remember the intention of this poem was to make fun of pimple. "Bleed with red dye" was supposed to say something like most emo kids crazy 'suffering' was their imagination and fake.
on for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub
1 Mar 2009, 11:13 PM
lol
on brain cookies by nentwined
26 Feb 2009, 9:43 PM
i lol'd
on WISHES SHE COULD FORGET and FLOWERS BY THE ROCK by iowajerms
7 Aug 2008, 3:45 PM
Why do you add two poems? Is it because you couldn't wait to hear how awful your stuff is?
"oh but, you know, they're both talking about the same thing. it's really-"
FUCK. OKAY.
Well just fix the last two rhymes in the first poem. Too much... force. Didn't flow well at all compared to the rest.
The second poem, I find not horrible.
How do you expect to rate this? I'm actually gonna rate this and you put me a predicament. thanks.
"oh but, you know, they're both talking about the same thing. it's really-"
FUCK. OKAY.
Well just fix the last two rhymes in the first poem. Too much... force. Didn't flow well at all compared to the rest.
The second poem, I find not horrible.
How do you expect to rate this? I'm actually gonna rate this and you put me a predicament. thanks.
on Social Studies is for MORANS!! by T. Jonathron Remp
7 Aug 2008, 3:37 PM
Unfortunately, I tried your poetry and not even sea salt helped it's extreme blandness.
Do you plan on being a horrible rapper when you grow up?
Do you plan on being a horrible rapper when you grow up?
on GOD'S MOST WONDERFUL CREATION by iowajerms
7 Aug 2008, 12:33 PM
YOUR NEXT POEM SHOULD BE ABOUT CAPS LOCK
change dull to dim and we'll talk.
change dull to dim and we'll talk.
on A List of Names Worth Listing by SupremeDreamer
6 Aug 2008, 11:13 PM
i got no mention. :( why am i even here? i don't know
replying on Inspire Me by Blindpoetry
14 Mar 2007, 7:06 PM
Good Lord, your timing is impeccable.
replying on A Fake Hollywood by Blindpoetry
14 Mar 2007, 7:04 PM
I might have given your comment a thought two years ago.
replying on Pawn by Blindpoetry
25 May 2006, 7:53 AM
neither is your critisism.
replying on "Good Bye" by Blindpoetry
25 May 2006, 7:52 AM
Like your not
replying on The Cookies by Blindpoetry
25 May 2006, 7:51 AM
you