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Inspire Me (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
You inspire a perfect mind You inspire lovely sounds You inspire a perfect mind You inspire me to break This is something unusuall Something new to me You are something weird And why do you scream? I still don't know what you... Say you inspire yourself Say you caught the blinding faith I can't hear you... your deep in Sea, I can see your face Inspiring me is your blood Screams and loud sounds is my Comforting speech Inpediment you love I do Like you and your Tortured Screams Don't be scared Because I love the pain It inspires my love I love your stupidity Helping my career I love you Like no one else in your mind Inspiring me to help Solve my problem I love you for Blanking my eyes And your screams I love; not you You, your screams Inspire me

Up the ladder: Fancy
Down the ladder: Dancing

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.642391
Overall Rank: 12333
Posted: October 31, 2004 6:05 PM PST; Last modified: October 31, 2004 6:05 PM PST
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Comments:
[5] Dovina @ 24.52.156.155 | 2-Nov-04/8:10 PM | Reply
blind poetry. Open your eyes.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.11.192.79 > Dovina | 3-Nov-04/1:43 PM | Reply
*stares at super glue*

Damn K-4
[2] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.171.118 | 14-Mar-07/3:02 PM | Reply
Good Lord, this is angsty. Sounds like lyrics for an emo band.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 70.172.227.111 > cheese.doodles | 14-Mar-07/7:06 PM | Reply
Good Lord, your timing is impeccable.
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