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Dancing (Free verse) by not_a_philosopher Dancing
dancing through out life
dancing up the stairs
dancing my way back down
Dancing
Dancing
dancing through out life
dancing up to you
dancing my way away
Dancing
Dancing
dancing through out life
dancing up to hate
(kicking him in the balls)
dancing my way away
Dancing
Up the ladder:
40 ozs to the factory
Down the ladder:
In the Waiting Room by Elizabeth Bishop
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Posted: April 14, 2005 2:28 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 2:28 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.642391 Overall Rank: 12333 Comments:
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thepinkbunnyofdoom @ 4.224.24.230
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15-Apr-05/10:19 AM
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Looks like a textbook example from chem. 101, and almost as boring. "(kicking him in the balls)" is the only saving grace. -6-
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