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Dancing (Free verse) by not_a_philosopher

Dancing dancing through out life dancing up the stairs dancing my way back down Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to you dancing my way away Dancing Dancing dancing through out life dancing up to hate (kicking him in the balls) dancing my way away Dancing

thepinkbunnyofdoom 15-Apr-05/10:19 AM
Looks like a textbook example from chem. 101, and almost as boring. "(kicking him in the balls)" is the only saving grace. -6-




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