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A Fake Hollywood (Free verse) by Blindpoetry
Space is the final piece of land We need more Hollywood Nation Stopped by a dirtry hand Forget about the sea and work on our plantation Dodge this, there is to much work We'll drive slaves station to station Broken tears land on many heads Where are our Hollywood Fantasies? Trains may crash and land on beds But passengers still dream of Fake Tragedies Why is everyone transferring to this cult? We're ditching all of the endless possibilities

Down the ladder: Altitude

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.8
Weighted score: 4.9761596
Overall Rank: 8344
Posted: January 9, 2005 9:46 AM PST; Last modified: January 9, 2005 9:46 AM PST
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[6] RION12 @ 64.136.26.226 | 16-Jan-05/5:46 PM | Reply
Do you really think Hollywood is that fake?
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.11.192.79 > RION12 | 16-Jan-05/6:02 PM | Reply
Actually.
More than it is for Hollywood. It's about kids who think their life is crap.

Fake Tragedies... tears on heads, sweating for ideas, on many heads. cult of fake shit. endless possibilities limited by wanting something less.

blurp.
[7] Dovina @ 12.72.5.101 | 16-Jan-05/6:13 PM | Reply
They named Hollywood after what they thought was holly. It was not holly, but a look-alike, the toyan bush, which also has red berries at Christmas time. Hollywood's been a fake ever since. And use spellcheck!
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.11.192.79 > Dovina | 16-Jan-05/6:52 PM | Reply
toyanwood...
yikes.
[1] cheese.doodles @ 70.52.171.118 | 14-Mar-07/3:05 PM | Reply
Your irritating rhyme scheme makes this nearly unreadable.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 70.172.227.111 > cheese.doodles | 14-Mar-07/7:04 PM | Reply
I might have given your comment a thought two years ago.
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