Pawn

Member since 2003 · Posted 30 Dec 2003 · 5 comments

I'm just another one of your pawns, That always spawns, In your heart. Making us think we will never part. Should I forget what I've heard? Or just end everything without a word? I've always feared I'd be in this, Making a risk, Of braking my heart, And knowing we will, someday, part... -spence

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6 votes so far. Yours would make 7.6 votes so far

5 comments

[n/a] Blindpoetry 30-Dec-03/8:20 PM Reply

someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?

[n/a] INTRANSIT 2-Jan-04/6:05 AM Reply

Also, take the time to read comments on other poems you read. If something a writer said sparks your interest, follow it. The best part of poemranker is not necessarily the most recent poems posted. Roam the back halls. Study the graffiti. no vote

[n/a] Blindpoetry › INTRANSIT 2-Jan-04/6:19 AM Reply

thanks, I'll try that

[2] Edna Sweetlove 20-May-06/4:45 PM Reply

Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.

[n/a] Blindpoetry › Edna Sweetlove 25-May-06/7:53 AM Reply

neither is your critisism.