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Pawn (Pimple) by Blindpoetry I'm just another one of your pawns,
That always spawns,
In your heart.
Making us think we will never part.
Should I forget what I've heard?
Or just end everything without a word?
I've always feared I'd be in this,
Making a risk,
Of braking my heart,
And knowing we will, someday, part... -spence
Up the ladder:
The hypocrisy of calling it tolerance
Down the ladder:
Pain, I Curse Thee
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Posted: December 30, 2003 1:27 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 1:27 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.820706 Overall Rank: 10932 Comments:
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Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15
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30-Dec-03/8:20 PM
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someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
Also, take the time to read comments on other poems you read. If something a writer said sparks your interest, follow it. The best part of poemranker is not necessarily the most recent poems posted. Roam the back halls. Study the graffiti. no vote
thanks, I'll try that
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.
neither is your critisism.
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