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Pawn (Pimple) by Blindpoetry
I'm just another one of your pawns, That always spawns, In your heart. Making us think we will never part. Should I forget what I've heard? Or just end everything without a word? I've always feared I'd be in this, Making a risk, Of braking my heart, And knowing we will, someday, part... -spence

Up the ladder: The Drop
Down the ladder: There she is!

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.3333335
Weighted score: 4.820706
Overall Rank: 10923
Posted: December 30, 2003 1:27 PM PST; Last modified: December 30, 2003 1:27 PM PST
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[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 | 30-Dec-03/8:20 PM | Reply
someone gives me a two and doesn't tell me where I went wrong? *sigh* then how can I improve my work!?
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.46 | 2-Jan-04/6:05 AM | Reply
Also, take the time to read comments on other poems you read. If something a writer said sparks your interest, follow it. The best part of poemranker is not necessarily the most recent poems posted. Roam the back halls. Study the graffiti. no vote
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15 > INTRANSIT | 2-Jan-04/6:19 AM | Reply
thanks, I'll try that
[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 81.179.83.12 | 20-May-06/4:45 PM | Reply
Truly dreadful. And your spelling isn't much good either.
[n/a] Blindpoetry @ 70.172.227.111 > Edna Sweetlove | 25-May-06/7:53 AM | Reply
neither is your critisism.
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