on some deleted poem
25 May 2004, 9:47 AM
five
on In Love as in Love by Everyone
26 May 2004, 8:55 PM
I felt that I was scammed by the hault of the ending...
But I really liked it, aside from that note.
But I really liked it, aside from that note.
on I love you by AskittlesK
28 May 2004, 7:33 PM
Funny...
I have a poem with the exactsame title.
such ciche'ness... -_-;
I have a poem with the exactsame title.
such ciche'ness... -_-;
on Should A Ramble Make Sense? by Blindpoetry
30 May 2004, 4:28 PM
The rule is, killingjuliet, that you gotta support your opinion on why you put down a two.
Even if it is 'It just sucks', I really want to know.
:)
Even if it is 'It just sucks', I really want to know.
:)
on 0 by MacFrantic
17 Jun 2004, 11:26 PM
I don't get how 0 relates to the poem. 0.o;
But i like it.
But i like it.
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2004, 9:39 AM
Was good, but sort of got a little worse each stanza, in my opinion.
But still good enough for an 8.
But still good enough for an 8.
on Writer's Block by Bhaskaryya
27 Dec 2004, 9:54 PM
I've seen this subject written a lot.
Then again. I write alot of angsty, crappy high school poems. I shouldn't be talking.
ur.
Then again. I write alot of angsty, crappy high school poems. I shouldn't be talking.
ur.
on Lovelier Than Love by Bhaskaryya
28 Dec 2004, 10:43 PM
Votes make it more clear and exact, depending on who comments.
I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.
I liked this a lot. Didn't spot any errors. (but was i actually looking? nope)
Flowed well.
on Rain by dancin_n_da_moonlite
15 Jan 2005, 7:34 PM
I would have really liked this more.
If it had more of a point. Maybe.
And if their is. I don't see it.
But I liked the way you wrote it. And what you used to make it so alternative.
So despite its lack in... reason. and. the why'ness.
Your creative bland Davey and Katie make up for it.
It's just so. Weird.
If it had more of a point. Maybe.
And if their is. I don't see it.
But I liked the way you wrote it. And what you used to make it so alternative.
So despite its lack in... reason. and. the why'ness.
Your creative bland Davey and Katie make up for it.
It's just so. Weird.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2005, 7:53 PM
I laughed and then sat for a second and thought about it.
Bacons not real food anymore?! I feel like that dog.
It's BACOOOON!!
Bacons not real food anymore?! I feel like that dog.
It's BACOOOON!!
on In The Beginning by Dovina
15 Jan 2005, 8:10 PM
Sounds like the yearly Bible Reader that always visited my Elementry and Middle School. lol
I didn't get the last line, though.
:-/
I didn't get the last line, though.
:-/
on some deleted poem
16 Jan 2005, 8:18 AM
I thought the last stanza could have been different from the second stanza, but it's still nice. :)
on some deleted poem
10 Feb 2005, 3:27 PM
blatantly obviously, this isn't good.
The only good thing I found in this to my liking was
I could build them in pots
One by one
Drop by drop
The rest, I'm sorry to say, needs work.
You begin as if in a conversation and then randomly try to rhyme without much purpose - like a twelve year old.
Then you attempt to sound all knowingish in line four.
eeccchhh
Then somethingsoemthing about a bee.
The only good thing I found in this to my liking was
I could build them in pots
One by one
Drop by drop
The rest, I'm sorry to say, needs work.
You begin as if in a conversation and then randomly try to rhyme without much purpose - like a twelve year old.
Then you attempt to sound all knowingish in line four.
eeccchhh
Then somethingsoemthing about a bee.
on Step Up by Blindpoetry
19 Feb 2005, 4:07 PM
I was a freakin' tard and wrote a huge reply while not logged in. ...And it didn't register or something.
We've eliminated Anonymous comments? Crap. That bites.
So I'll say in short:
It's sort of random[ish] in the first stanza, but then i come to a point the rest of it. It's about how I am always openly opinionated with my friends, which turns into arguments and debates - which I love. And I encourage them to do so.. just..because.. It's fun for me. XD
Nothing really deep. At first it was, but then i was like... Eff the deepness, let me be real.
We've eliminated Anonymous comments? Crap. That bites.
So I'll say in short:
It's sort of random[ish] in the first stanza, but then i come to a point the rest of it. It's about how I am always openly opinionated with my friends, which turns into arguments and debates - which I love. And I encourage them to do so.. just..because.. It's fun for me. XD
Nothing really deep. At first it was, but then i was like... Eff the deepness, let me be real.
on He tells me to imagine... by RION12
19 Feb 2005, 9:00 PM
Kind of blandish.
I agree with Dovina on this.
metaphors, similies, oxymorons, personification, ect. -they are your friends. ;)
I agree with Dovina on this.
metaphors, similies, oxymorons, personification, ect. -they are your friends. ;)
on I… the blank paper of unsaid things by Prince of Void
14 Apr 2005, 3:07 PM
Unless my age deprives me of known knowledge, I thought that this was a very good piece.
Well, unique, anyways.
Well, unique, anyways.
on a conversation by crooked_smile
14 Apr 2005, 3:24 PM
obsessive yuck
on some deleted poem
13 Jul 2005, 7:08 PM
It's kind[of] like all your posted poems formed into one and this was the end result.
I might have liked this better without the first line.
And a few others
I might have liked this better without the first line.
And a few others
I dun think you can falsly die, eh?
*shrugs* ... Nothing special... just the same cliche love poem like everyone else writes about in similar words and phrases to the point of being whenthe next time you write a love poem, it'll be considered plagarism...