Me

Member since 2004 · Posted 16 Sep 2004 · 4 comments

So what does this make me? Less than what you imagined, or more than what you wanted? A dream , A fantasy Attachment is all it can be, but so much more. I've tried to imagine I've tried to just be But all I can see is me. And what does that make me? Somebody will know, and when they do I'll be all. And so much more. Just me No matter how wrong I can be I'm always just me Is that what you wanted, Is that what you see? I can't give you all, All I can give you is me.

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[7] Blindpoetry 16-Sep-04/2:29 PM Reply

I liked this.
Except for the me be me me me be me see me thing you got going.

[10] NoSage 17-Sep-04/8:00 AM Reply

You start off on the wrong foot by saying attatchment is all it can be, is there no room for growth? Still, I like it. Also, I imagine all of you IS everything to the right one.

[4] MacFrantic 1-Feb-07/7:56 PM Reply

Wonderful confession from 7th grader to 7th grader. Bravo!

[n/a] berdabear 10-Apr-08/12:39 PM Reply

I found him! All he needs is me, and I am sooo all! This one has now been published several times and I am reminded each time I see it that dreams can become reality!