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Me (Free verse) by berdabear So what does this make me?
Less than what you imagined, or more than what you wanted?
A dream , A fantasy
Attachment is all it can be, but so much more.
I've tried to imagine I've tried to just be
But all I can see is me.
And what does that make me?
Somebody will know, and when they do I'll be all.
And so much more.
Just me
No matter how wrong I can be
I'm always just me
Is that what you wanted, Is that what you see?
I can't give you all,
All I can give you is me.
Up the ladder:
Fun At The Gynaecologists
Down the ladder:
Kristi's Quiescence
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Posted: September 16, 2004 10:00 AM PDT; Last modified: September 16, 2004 10:00 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.5555553 Overall Rank: 2464 Comments:
You start off on the wrong foot by saying attatchment is all it can be, is there no room for growth? Still, I like it. Also, I imagine all of you IS everything to the right one.
Wonderful confession from 7th grader to 7th grader. Bravo!
I found him! All he needs is me, and I am sooo all! This one has now been published several times and I am reminded each time I see it that dreams can become reality!
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Except for the me be me me me be me see me thing you got going.