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Me (Free verse) by berdabear

So what does this make me? Less than what you imagined, or more than what you wanted? A dream , A fantasy Attachment is all it can be, but so much more. I've tried to imagine I've tried to just be But all I can see is me. And what does that make me? Somebody will know, and when they do I'll be all. And so much more. Just me No matter how wrong I can be I'm always just me Is that what you wanted, Is that what you see? I can't give you all, All I can give you is me.

NoSage 17-Sep-04/8:00 AM
You start off on the wrong foot by saying attatchment is all it can be, is there no room for growth? Still, I like it. Also, I imagine all of you IS everything to the right one.




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