I felt that I was scammed by the hault of the ending...

But I really liked it, aside from that note.

You're still doing it. Feelings and brings don't rhyme - nor do always and days.

And also:

In Love as in Love (Free verse) by Everyone/CLS

Your hair is long, shining, and smells of love
My hands love to roam through the golden tresses
Getting lost in your soul and the stars above
I can't get enough of your passionate caresses


untitled 4 (Free verse) by francis nor capule

probably tons of love.
perhaps the sun would indeed shine, from up above.


My Wonderful (Free verse) by ga_writer

My life is nothing with out your wonderful love
You are my beautiful angel sent to me from above


Was it Me?? (Free verse) by ga_writer

You were my angel sent from above,
Sent here for me to shower you with my love.


A.E.G. (Free verse) by nowhereman

How can you say you feel no love
for me, I hold you so high above


An Angel (Lyric) by broken_wing11

An angel walked thru the gates today
Into His heavens up above
An angel has been blessed
She left us with her love


Arrows (Lyric) by Miggy

Arrows striking me from above
Brightening me up with your love


Tragic Love (Sonnet) by WithoutLife

A heart that can never be given away
To the one I truly love,
Must forever wonder astray
Was it condemned from above?


Why Daddy? (Lyric) by candaliesa

Now I'm stting with God up above.
Wishing she would have given me love.


You Give Me Love (Free verse) by Free2Rhyme15

The brightest star shinning, in the sky above
Is nothing to you the person who gives me love.


Holding on for Jesus (Lyric) by Everyone

Thought I'd learn from my mistakes
Just like the Lord above
But when I need my friends the most
I turn my back on those I love


Empty Sorrow (Free verse) by hummers86

Too many times
The ones we love
Slip from our grasp
And fall from above


My Angel (Free verse) by baby_d

You have proved to be an angel,
Sent from heaven above.
To bring back to me,
The faith I had lost in Love.


I'll Take You In My Arms (Free verse) by ilovecars131

Never again shall you yearn for love
Nor pray for an angel sent from above


The meaning of Love (Free verse) by The Slender Blade

What is this?
An angel in heaven?
No, this is love,
From the skies above.


Angel (Free verse) by Butterfly1120

She to me is an angel.
One sent from up above.
Here to give, and not recieve,
someone with so much love.


My Guardian Angel (Limerick) by ramtheman1

I know my mom's in the heavens above,
Watching over us all with lots of love.


hells kitchen (Free verse) by crwncka1

chains are seen hanging from above,
floating around in the coldness of the wind,
felt coming in though the open pass way,
is where I have come,
to find the soul of my love,


Broken (Lyric) by Irischer Junge

Though I've lost
My only love,
I've not lost
My God above.


no name (Free verse) by ~ska~

And the streets of cold.
Trying to find love,
Your lookin' the wrong way,
It's right up above.


Forbidden Love (Ode) by wcrystal lane swiftw

Radiance beams from you; my beauty queen,
I know He is watching from above,
Is our moment all a dream?
Why must this be a forbidden love?


The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') (Pimple) by scitz

I have fell deep in love,
She’s an Angel from the sky above.


The Grave (thanks to z) (Free verse) by Mr Pig

At least you’re under the willow
You liked the thought of it weeping above you
And all I can say, in predictable cliche,
Is, God, how much I love you.


Angel (Lyric) by mistaric

You’re an angel,
Sent from up above
You’re an angel,
You’re the one I love


I wanna die (Pimple) by scitz

I want to join the Angels above,
Because in heaven at least I’ve a chance to be loved.


Malcontent (Lyric) by EAger to Offend

Taken good care of
by politics called "love"
retarded defectives and
mutants can rise above


Am I Good Enough? (Free verse) by wcrystal lane swiftw

I want nothing more than for you to return my love.
I write pretty lines for you about the heavens above.


The Night You Came (Pimple) by god'swife

That night I gazed down,
as if somehow, I were floating above us,
sleeping naked together on your simple bed
How immaculate we are, how immaculate our love is.


A Sullen Moon (Free verse) by Jimbo

The silence of the moon suspended above
Brings such feelings of want and love


hopefully im something (Free verse) by ~ska~

Maybe I'm the girl you love,
Maybe I'm the girl you look down on from the stars above.


When Tomorrow Starts Without Me (Free verse) by Artemis745

He said my place was ready
In heaven far above
And that I would have to leave behind
All those I dearly love.


Sunday (Free verse) by cleverdevice

My eyes could not see
What I wanted to love me
The earth and the flowers
Are forever above me


Goodbye (Free verse) by Sunshine Conkey

Maybe someday he'll find true love
Just know "sunshine" will be watching from above.


Dont break my heart (Free verse) by Cali

Prove to me this feeling is wrong
And fill me with your love
Show me you’re that angel they talk about
The guardian from up above


Talking... (Free verse) by thirdchildofpain

Life's too long for me to love
So take my life
and send me above.


I'm reserved (Free verse) by Alyssa91

of enthusiasm and all of the above
when now all i want is to be loved.


Dear Lord (Sonnet) by simone_girard

And now in you I place my trust and love
In you dear lord in heaven above.

Symbol Of Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard

So they say goodbye to their symbol of love
As their baby moves on to god above


Love (Sonnet) by simone_girard

I do believe the lord above
Created you for me to love


My girl (Sonnet) by simone_girard

But you were born to me because of love
And each day I'll thank the lord above.


Song For My Soulmate (Lyric) by John K

Have you ever seen two people madly in love?
They've been given a gift from their God above,


Remember (Lyric) by Luv2write

I remember the summer of warmth and love
I never doubted that you cared
My angel, my Godsend, from above
Thank you for all that we've shared.


Mummy (Free verse) by Cali

Who’s going to teach me the joys of life?
And teach me about love
I wish my mummy could do that
From way up there above


if tommorow never comes (Lyric) by junkyarddog13

And said my place was ready,
In heaven far above,
And that I'd have to leave behind
All those I dearly love.


To Me (Free verse) by Birdman42s

You fill my heart with love;
You're a God-sent gift from above.


The Courtesan (Sonnet) by horus8

But to me she was my only love.
A reflection from my Lord above.


Live (Lyric) by Luv2write

We can live for every moment
We can die for what we love
We can dream of sunny days to come
And what awaits us up above


I Love You (Free verse) by babyBOOMER

I Will Never Compromise My Love
Yet Dreaming Takes Me Far Away
Of a Woman Lying above


A Best Friend (Free verse) by Birdman42s

You're an angel from God up above
and I'm thankful for your understanding love


Time T R A V A I L (Free verse) by Jimbo

A rdent pleasures, now once removed
A rousing my thoughts of love
A rid and barren, soiled, I stood in my garden
A waiting a day from above


Foolish (Free verse) by AmberNicole

Like a snake, you stole my love
And made me believe you were sent from above.


Goodbye Dad (Free verse) by Caducus

Dad, just want to say I love you
and God can never be above you,


9/11 tribute (Free verse) by Caducus

Two held hands in an image of love,
Angels were crying watching above,


Insult (Free verse) by Caducus

who does nothing but criticize people above her,
Who thinks nothing of friends who tried to love her.


Hidden (Free verse) by tbeach84

I hide from security, from comfort and from love
I hide from these painful things, proclaiming God above


lost love (Free verse) by cherish

My head aches from heartaches of my lost love.
Also in hopes of one day being together one day up above.


Maria (Ode) by Nicholas Monson

I feel lightness from below,
See sunshine from above,
My joy is now complete
With the woman whom I love.


Waiting (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

To rekindle our love
I'd walk to space
Ask for help from above
Just to see your face


Trust (Free verse) by hobojo

You reach for my hand
Expecting my love
"I am so sorry"
I say as I look from above


The City (New Jerusaem) (Lyric) by blkarak

Hope, love, voices from above,


A BACHUS MAN A MANY (Free verse) by Garrett S Sexton

Now slumped in some shite as normality walks above.
His dying last words.MAMMA!I NEED LOVE.


My One True Love (Lyric) by Hooman

So take my hand my dear and together we'll reach out to the mystery
above,
For we have the blessing of our fate, as you are my one and only
true love.


Sent from Above (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

Time passed and we spoke move
and soon we fell in love
And in my heart I knew it was true
this love was from above


It's All 'Cause I Love You (Free verse) by Tigger8023

You're the perfect star in the sky above,
The one I wish upon with all my love.


The Wooden Armchair Of Similar Dreams (Free verse) by Caducus

You took so long to be taken,
Too long for the vultures who circled above,
In heaven your dreams awaken,
A simple dream called love.


Wanting (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly

All she wants is someone to love
She used to think that love was from above


Must be Fate (Free verse) by hansa1957

I've found my soul mate
My one true love
This must be fate
By the hands of someone up above


Whisper Of Truth (Free verse) by IndianEyes

Passion and deapth, the courage to love,
never-ending as space up above.


love 2 (Free verse) by little_angel_maria

as i've failed in all of the above,
I admit by chance maybe i just fell in love,


Good Love (Free verse) by w~* ATHENA *~w

what makes a good love
does it come from above

Too Late (Lyric) by Miggy

in love,
as I see you up above


Child of my Buttocks (Lyric) by -=Dark_Angel=-

Is pitiful, and flawed by Love.
The greatest anguish from Above


You're the Only One (Free verse) by Chels85

I ask the Lord above,
Why do you have to be the one I love


Essential Love (Other) by CharismaAllOver

God made love from high in heaven high above.


Thank You (Free verse) by pnaipoet

Thank you for so much love,
you are truely sent from above.


Be My Girl (Free verse) by disturbedone182

You must have been sent from the heavens above
For you have earned my eternal love


cylinder (Other) by kthulah

and we together feed the starved
if nothing but our love
and whether bare of head or scarved
teach them to rise above


Dear Ms. Sexton (Lyric) by <{Baba^Yaga}>

I'm better now, and so high above
The Doctors cut out all our love


NIGHTMILK SUNBLOOD (Free verse) by horus8

Feel the sheets soaking up our love?
Hearing the rich choruses droop from above


Contra Mundum (Other) by psychedelic

Contra mundum, my love
You're my lifeline from above.


LIKE AN ANGEL (Free verse) by jeremy bjelland

She has lots of love,
Just like an angel from above.


Butterfly (Lyric) by coryh64

Because you???re my definition of true love
I want to fly with you to the stars above


The Message (Free verse) by venusdemilo

You were my heart, my one true love
But a message from above


The Wrong Choice (Free verse) by TheVampireLeStan

My family, I truely love.
This, they thought I was above.


A prom that could never be (Free verse) by Eric Johnson

Does a heart have limit, for those that it can love,
I say no, and I shall prove, that I can rise above.


This Strange Feeling (Lyric) by snowing

Or a heavenly thing sent from above?
Could this strange feeling really be love?


Vespers and Cobwebs (Free verse) by Bluesee

The Happy and Chained
To release and uphold
To the Light up Above
To relax, bathed in Love


Night Song (Lyric) by Sailing Solo

Spinning and whirling around the darkened room
singing a silver song of longing and love
the light of her voice dispelling all gloom
as the stars from heaven shot down from above


A Sonnet for Barbara (Other) by PatColvin

A Girl who'd love me for the guy I am,
A Woman worthy of my deepest love,
A Beauty who would cling to me, her man,
A Princess faithful to my Lord above.


I'll Miss You (Free verse) by Eric Johnson

Oh Lord, I'm sad, and yet I'm shining, I've grown to hate this game
of love,
And yet when I, stare at the stars, I can't help but rise above.


Class Reunion (Free verse) by Lenore

For with the aid of a gentle breeze
Waving their boughs so high above,
I hear them whisper "Come in, come in,
Come in to this garden
That you have grown to love."


him (Free verse) by akriti_mehta

But somehow I just keep
running away from all his love,
His love sinks to the bottom,
My fear rises above.


The Heros (Free verse) by madjack2

For peace and love
We have walked many roads,
Blessed
by heaven above,
Down the many paths we've strode.


I MISS YOU (Lyric) by jroday

Have faith my son in the Lord above.
He'll watch over you with a mother's love

Your poems are always the poster child of anti-climax.

And here I thought your heart was square.