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Should A Ramble Make Sense? (Free verse) by Blindpoetry Iâm programming my heart
Into the soul
Of the one I love
Out of the millions of possibilities
There are a million land mines!
A heart as warm as mine
Canât be frozen in time
A heart as cold as mine
Never saw this happening
So much shocking behavior!
Probability shot me before I had a chance
With the cumbersome weight of your mind
Nervousness laughed at me while I embarrassed
The conceptual mindâ¦
Meeting new characteristics is a scary thought!
Iâm glad to see your face
Glad to see youâre alive
Glad to find what youâve been inside
Glad to wonder where you are and miss the choir
Hide your eyes with the burning bush!
Hair strings become the puppet remote control
Life begins a new age
Bling has been destroyed and love takes over!
Itâs a controversial age! Blind your Eyes!
Watch your step, itâs a steep life!
Up the ladder:
Life Is Like A Rose
Down the ladder:
Mullet Haiku
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 3.4
Posted: May 29, 2004 9:45 PM PDT; Last modified: May 29, 2004 9:45 PM PDTWeighted score: 4.809275 Overall Rank: 11015 Comments:
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zodiac @ 65.161.41.48
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30-May-04/4:44 AM
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No. But one should not ramble. Stellar use of exclamation marks, though. As always.
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Blindpoetry @ 68.106.171.15
> zodiac
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30-May-04/11:40 AM
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I really ment for the outkast lines to have exclamation, but it felt necissary to put them in other places... As I was literraly shouting this while writing it. 0_o;
The rule is, killingjuliet, that you gotta support your opinion on why you put down a two.
Even if it is 'It just sucks', I really want to know. :)
No it isn't, you dunce. The site is poemeranker. A site devoted to the ranking of poemes. Any other activities are incidental, and frankly I think it's appalling that comments are allowed at all.
i wasn't actually 'calling it a rule' ... just... something I say. A figure a speech some may call it? *shrugs*
I was merely asking in an interrogative way. And why not comment? You do not believe in constructive critiquing? 332 view(s)
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