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Should A Ramble Make Sense? (Free verse) by Blindpoetry

I’m programming my heart Into the soul Of the one I love Out of the millions of possibilities There are a million land mines! A heart as warm as mine Can’t be frozen in time A heart as cold as mine Never saw this happening So much shocking behavior! Probability shot me before I had a chance With the cumbersome weight of your mind Nervousness laughed at me while I embarrassed The conceptual mind… Meeting new characteristics is a scary thought! I’m glad to see your face Glad to see you’re alive Glad to find what you’ve been inside Glad to wonder where you are and miss the choir Hide your eyes with the burning bush! Hair strings become the puppet remote control Life begins a new age Bling has been destroyed and love takes over! It’s a controversial age! Blind your Eyes! Watch your step, it’s a steep life!

zodiac 30-May-04/4:44 AM
No. But one should not ramble. Stellar use of exclamation marks, though. As always.




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