Poemranker [Poem: Iâ¦ the blank paper of unsaid things] [by Prince of Void] Thu Nov 21 08:20:08 PST 2024

Iâ¦ the blank paper of unsaid things (Free verse) by Prince of Void

Iâ¦ the blank paper of unsaid things And you â¦desireâs wings Above a city of despairs Iâ¦Within body emptiness You...The point free from nothingness I...Lowness of a shadow in the loneliness You...Silence waiting to overcome the universe Iâ¦ambiguities of a mystic in every verse And you â¦the key of every verse I â¦tears of the night Wish to be last upon dawn When I can be faded into your light

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.0
Weighted score: 4.9525743
Overall Rank: 8851

Posted: April 14, 2005 1:36 PM PDT; Last modified: April 14, 2005 1:36 PM PDT
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[8] Blindpoetry @ 70.186.160.225 | 14-Apr-05/3:07 PM | Reply

Unless my age deprives me of known knowledge, I thought that this was a very good piece.

Well, unique, anyways.

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