Iâ¦ the blank paper of unsaid things

Member since 2002 · Posted 14 Apr 2005 · 1 comment

Iâ¦ the blank paper of unsaid things And you â¦desireâs wings Above a city of despairs Iâ¦Within body emptiness You...The point free from nothingness I...Lowness of a shadow in the loneliness You...Silence waiting to overcome the universe Iâ¦ambiguities of a mystic in every verse And you â¦the key of every verse I â¦tears of the night Wish to be last upon dawn When I can be faded into your light

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[8] Blindpoetry 14-Apr-05/3:07 PM Reply

Unless my age deprives me of known knowledge, I thought that this was a very good piece.

Well, unique, anyways.