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I… the blank paper of unsaid things (Free verse) by Prince of Void

I… the blank paper of unsaid things And you …desire’s wings Above a city of despairs I…Within body emptiness You...The point free from nothingness I...Lowness of a shadow in the loneliness You...Silence waiting to overcome the universe I…ambiguities of a mystic in every verse And you …the key of every verse I …tears of the night Wish to be last upon dawn When I can be faded into your light

Blindpoetry 14-Apr-05/3:07 PM
Unless my age deprives me of known knowledge, I thought that this was a very good piece.

Well, unique, anyways.




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