| Re: savior of humanity: by Sapphire |
26-Aug-02/12:09 PM |
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26-Aug-02/12:13 PM |
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Keep it real, but unending
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26-Aug-02/12:20 PM |
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| Re: Disillusioned & Confused by Sigh'ense... |
28-Aug-02/8:35 PM |
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Thankx 4 the critique. and I look forward top more of your analysis...
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28-Aug-02/8:48 PM |
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Very sweet and comfortably read. Lovely in a saucy way(saucy meaning individually expressive and unique,signature comprehension, just as poetry should be). Philosophy by Da1
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| Re: as the hostage by silvertongueddevil |
28-Aug-02/8:55 PM |
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Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.
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| Re: desire is the constant by silvertongueddevil |
28-Aug-02/9:03 PM |
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing...
DA1 meant it too!
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| Re: would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil |
28-Aug-02/9:15 PM |
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The true affliction of whole-hearted desire conveyed nicely... Da1, on an full stomach
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| Re: overwhelmed by nentwined |
28-Aug-02/9:22 PM |
RACY ANDinsightful, I especially like the imagery and upherismic development. Good as usual, Da1 with defecation on my lips
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| Re: Wildcatting The Canard: by horus8 |
28-Aug-02/9:39 PM |
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Oh shiznit! I love this in ways i shouldnt... Da1 has been subconscously contradicted to my satisfying surprise. Keep it raw and nasty-saucy! One
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28-Aug-02/9:42 PM |
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Very gooey..( It's a good thing, i think).. Da1
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| Re: Why am I here? by harrytuttle |
28-Aug-02/10:03 PM |
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How depressing man. But it works to a certain extent.
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28-Aug-02/10:06 PM |
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Through and through... Da1, thoroughly
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| Re: Freeform (No votes yet) 0 comments by abecedarian |
28-Aug-02/10:27 PM |
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| Re: no pretty words by silvertongueddevil |
28-Aug-02/10:43 PM |
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PIMP!!! In a major way, this saucy as can be... DA1, missing my Ex.
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| Re: Victim No More by PawnedTidal |
2-Sep-02/1:13 AM |
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Well displayed and interesting. I like the line, " Last night I woke up crying/ Becuase all my dreams were shattered. Personal aura also.
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| Re: Apathy by nentwined |
2-Sep-02/1:19 AM |
Saucy to the extreme degree... Da1 with satisfeid eyes
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| Re: The Wind by Reuben Spiteri |
11-Oct-02/7:43 PM |
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| Re: Ever With Me by forsaken |
17-Jan-09/9:19 PM |
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| Re: If I Had by forsaken |
17-Jan-09/9:25 PM |
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