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Free verse № 1486

desire is the constant

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 4 comments

desire is the constant sense of loss for what we have never had the blinded grow accustomed to the darkness while we are sad that there is a face we have not brushed with our mouth we know that there are words that if said by one mouth they would be true and it is the nights beside them that will be our rescue

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[5] anonymous 14-May-02/9:16 AM Reply
decent
[7] forestchild7 19-Jul-02/3:19 PM Reply
this so sounds like something I'm going through.. good job...
[7] horus8 31-Jul-02/5:51 PM Reply
you could very well be the succubus that stole christmas
[10] Sigh'ense... 28-Aug-02/9:03 PM Reply
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing...
DA1 meant it too!