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desire is the constant (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
desire is the constant sense of loss for what we have never had the blinded grow accustomed to the darkness while we are sad that there is a face we have not brushed with our mouth we know that there are words that if said by one mouth they would be true and it is the nights beside them that will be our rescue

Down the ladder: the only square cloud

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.769231
Weighted score: 5.5623527
Overall Rank: 2439
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:13 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:13 AM PDT
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[5]... anonymous @ 204.245.176.100 | 14-May-02/9:16 AM | Reply
decent
[7] forestchild7 @ 216.77.216.8 | 19-Jul-02/3:19 PM | Reply
this so sounds like something I'm going through.. good job...
[7] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 31-Jul-02/5:51 PM | Reply
you could very well be the succubus that stole christmas
[10] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.45.238 | 28-Aug-02/9:03 PM | Reply
DAMN! keep it deep and refreshing...
DA1 meant it too!
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