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the only square cloud (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
the only square cloud i have seen
is your suspended bed
drifting within stepladder range.
you dragged me aboard
and we spent the afternoon
playing two naked angels
taking a tumble,
heading for a fall.
we spent the evening
sharing the same rosey breath,
knitting our eyelashes and
weaving our hair until we slept.
we climbed down in the morning
much later than our waking,
ex-angels joining the world.
tender feet on solid ground,
we tethered your cloud
for keeping for the afternoons.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.769231
Weighted score: 5.5623527
Overall Rank: 2440
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:25 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:25 AM PDT
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