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the only square cloud (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
the only square cloud i have seen is your suspended bed drifting within stepladder range. you dragged me aboard and we spent the afternoon playing two naked angels taking a tumble, heading for a fall. we spent the evening sharing the same rosey breath, knitting our eyelashes and weaving our hair until we slept. we climbed down in the morning much later than our waking, ex-angels joining the world. tender feet on solid ground, we tethered your cloud for keeping for the afternoons.

Up the ladder: desire is the constant
Down the ladder: A Gift of Beauty...

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.769231
Weighted score: 5.5623527
Overall Rank: 2440
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:25 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:25 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 11-Jul-02/12:34 AM | Reply
Sunshine daydreams
[7] ThoughtfulSoul @ 130.156.132.194 | 1-Aug-02/9:32 PM | Reply
i love the talk of sex without actually sex talk
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