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Victim No More (Free verse) by PawnedTidal I hate the way you make me feel--
Like I'm less than I am.
Like I'm less than you.
Like I'm not worth a damn.
Was it something I did?
Or was this your plan all along?
No matter where I was,
You made me feel I didn't belong.
Last night I woke up crying
Because all my dreams were shattered,
When you tossed me aside
As though I never even mattered.
Well, that's the last tear
That I'll ever cry for you.
And that's the last dream
That I'll ever let die for you.
Don't worry about me,
I'll be just fine.
Get on with your life,
And stay the hell out of mine.
Up the ladder:
You
Down the ladder:
June 6, 1973
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
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Posted: September 1, 2002 5:41 PM PDT; Last modified: September 1, 2002 5:41 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5724 Comments:
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Sigh'ense... @ 205.188.209.107
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2-Sep-02/1:13 AM
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Well displayed and interesting. I like the line, " Last night I woke up crying/ Becuase all my dreams were shattered. Personal aura also.
Thanks!
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