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June 6, 1973 (Free verse) by Limness
I remember writing the date
And that Christine Zimmerman
and Miss Simmons both had red hair
I remember the hot light blue air
stifling my third grade classmates
too hot for early June
wearing shorts to school
(with a permission note)
Tall ground floor windows opened,
full of outside in
trying to concentrate but the bees,
the bees are making it tricky
their soft unspoken songs sweetalk
the flowering weeds, growing in the gap
between the brick edifice and
that flat black scraper-of-knees and palms.
The bees seduce me too,
too young to even spell seduction
but careening drunk in the June 6 sunshine
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Weighted score: 5.119203
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Posted: September 6, 2002 8:50 AM PDT; Last modified: September 11, 2002 8:13 AM PDT
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