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as the hostage (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
as the hostage
i would like to make a few demands of my own.
convention does not rule against this.
i want to wet your mouth with mine,
in a kiss that will take us places
conversation will never visit.
i want the ransom abandoned and the police closing in.
i want to be the vessel
that holds the scent
i inhale from your skin.
i want the high speed car chase.
i want to spend more hours
than the night is allowed to have
with you, naked and overwhelmed.
i want the armed stand-off.
i want to undress you in the sun.
i want snipers in the windows across the street.
i want you to reveal to me
more than all your photographs ever will.
i want the sounds of boots in the hallway.
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.6266217
Overall Rank: 2211
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDT
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