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as the hostage (Free verse) by silvertongueddevil
as the hostage i would like to make a few demands of my own. convention does not rule against this. i want to wet your mouth with mine, in a kiss that will take us places conversation will never visit. i want the ransom abandoned and the police closing in. i want to be the vessel that holds the scent i inhale from your skin. i want the high speed car chase. i want to spend more hours than the night is allowed to have with you, naked and overwhelmed. i want the armed stand-off. i want to undress you in the sun. i want snipers in the windows across the street. i want you to reveal to me more than all your photographs ever will. i want the sounds of boots in the hallway.

Up the ladder: Disfigure
Down the ladder: i am dirty with you

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.857143
Weighted score: 5.6266217
Overall Rank: 2211
Posted: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDT; Last modified: May 11, 2002 3:24 AM PDT
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Comments:
[8] hoopoe @ 62.254.32.4 | 21-May-02/11:33 AM | Reply
fanTASTic

gotcha!
[8] deleted user @ 206.180.235.13 | 24-Jun-02/1:48 AM | Reply
Unusual premise, but nicely done.
[10] feathers68 @ 216.209.173.101 | 9-Jul-02/9:09 AM | Reply
A perfect ten for a dancer!
or an number one! for the greatest I have yet to figure out which is the best.
[9] Sigh'ense... @ 66.214.45.238 | 28-Aug-02/8:55 PM | Reply
Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.
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