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Free verse № 1498

as the hostage

Member since 2002 · Posted 11 May 2002 · 4 comments

as the hostage i would like to make a few demands of my own. convention does not rule against this. i want to wet your mouth with mine, in a kiss that will take us places conversation will never visit. i want the ransom abandoned and the police closing in. i want to be the vessel that holds the scent i inhale from your skin. i want the high speed car chase. i want to spend more hours than the night is allowed to have with you, naked and overwhelmed. i want the armed stand-off. i want to undress you in the sun. i want snipers in the windows across the street. i want you to reveal to me more than all your photographs ever will. i want the sounds of boots in the hallway.

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4 comments

[8] hoopoe 21-May-02/11:33 AM Reply
fanTASTic

gotcha!
[8] deleted user 24-Jun-02/1:48 AM Reply
Unusual premise, but nicely done.
[10] feathers68 9-Jul-02/9:09 AM Reply
A perfect ten for a dancer!
or an number one! for the greatest I have yet to figure out which is the best.
[9] Sigh'ense... 28-Aug-02/8:55 PM Reply
Creatively sexy and attention demanding. Da1, with criminal intentions to kidnap.