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Why Me (Free verse) by blacksoul
Intensive care, tubes running from here to there.I'm in shock just
standing there, my heart is as empty as my pockets, hollowed out like a
locket.
Today I felt like crying the nurse said my father might be dying.
wandering around within a maze of subconscious chambers, I felt lost.
Just for a moment, a day, and all of the night. I salute you for the way
you fight. you are one of the reasons for my existence.I am his son that
could do no wrong. he is my
everything, so big and strong.
I've often wondered and even asked the dear lord the big question WHY!
why is you trying to take my father away?
I had a thought! giving me peace of mine and tranquility.
DECICATED TO JRODAY
(MY FATHER)
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.3333335
Weighted score: 5.62753
Overall Rank: 2190
Posted: November 18, 2004 11:51 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2004 11:51 AM PST
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Is jroday really your father, and is he really dying? Tell him I hope he's not dying.
thing,but he's a strong man, and a fighter. He talk to me about you before he had surgery. so I know you know what's going on.
He's in almost like a coma state right , but I will keep you informed. THANK YOU FOR YOUR COMMENT MAY GOD BLESS YOU AND YOUR FAMILY.