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Why Me (Free verse) by blacksoul

Intensive care, tubes running from here to there.I'm in shock just standing there, my heart is as empty as my pockets, hollowed out like a locket. Today I felt like crying the nurse said my father might be dying. wandering around within a maze of subconscious chambers, I felt lost. Just for a moment, a day, and all of the night. I salute you for the way you fight. you are one of the reasons for my existence.I am his son that could do no wrong. he is my everything, so big and strong. I've often wondered and even asked the dear lord the big question WHY! why is you trying to take my father away? I had a thought! giving me peace of mine and tranquility. DECICATED TO JRODAY (MY FATHER)

arduinn 19-Dec-04/6:32 PM
I'm sorry about your dad.. You hold on and be strong for your father will need that kind of strength from his family.




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