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savior of humanity: (Free verse) by Sapphire
beneath the darkly swirling pool
look down upon me
behold the rotting
corpse of mine essence
shattered by splintering illusion
vexed by
incoherent musings of mad men
torn asunder from the breast of mother
earth
savor the stench of her soured milk
you've wounded her
by tossing
aside her precious child
she kneels before you
though her pleads fall on
your deafened ear
and never touch your cold heart
have you no mercy for
the hapless?
are you so wicked to the core?
look inside yourself...
do
you not see my eyes staring back at you brother?
save me to save
yourself
bind us together in eternity
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.7894738
Weighted score: 3.846884
Overall Rank: 13466
Posted: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST; Last modified: March 16, 2002 1:12 AM PST
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